All Comments on 'Cuban Incest 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wow, great start

Very erotic - I wish it had been longer!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Shows promise.

Work on your grammer, especially punctuation (commas), and proofreading. This is a story that definitely shows promise.

C_frommnC_frommnabout 10 years ago
Great Start

Can't wait to hear more of your story and does Momma find out. do any of the girls get jealous.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Nice start; please break up the long paragraphs.

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