All Comments on 'Cuck and Bulls'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Ugh...

Author makes a case for being committed.

ElectricBadgerElectricBadgerover 11 years ago
Very good

Well written, but too many pronouns - you wavered back and forth between characters repeatedly with nothing but positions/situation to tell who you were talking about. A simple fix, though, just something to be aware of in the future. Hope to see more of this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
sick phucker

you are one sick muther phucker!

no wonder this country is rotting from the inside out!

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