by Just Plain Bob
your mouth bobie but in your spoken mind such as it is. I have neven seen such an intelligent talented self dismantling of character and self respect.
It seems purposeful and very self destructive. Why?
This isn't arousingly erotic to any semi-normal person and you know it. Puzzling aren't you even to yourself. Step back. Its time. You are worth it.
Chapter 1 was intriging. Chapter 2 was more or less a cheap imitation. 3 and 4 are starting downhill. If there are not any truely clever twists in the up coming chapters please submit them less often. You may have succeeded in satisfying your professed target audience but you have diminished your steller reputation!!!!!
Thanks for another saga. I'm always curious as to what your next work will bring. -- WhiteKnightAR
The one who wrote about cheating wives and the various fates that befell them. This new Bob's fascination with men sucking semen is leaving a bad taste in my mouth.