All Comments on 'Cum With Me'

Nimph writes a sensually compelling story of two long-time friends meeting for the first time. The story, much like the author?s ?Control?, written in the first person from the eyes of a young woman is presented so well that an accompanying video is not needed. Her teasing words make this old man?s heart beat fast! GP

I know this isn't really the point but your spelling was apalling. It was a fantastic idea for a story and well written except for the glaring fact that you obviously did not proof read this story before you submitted it. Personally, I couldn't even finish reading it. Perhaps you should write it again? Without so many mistakes?

I wish that people would leave their name if they comment, not that you have to but i would have liked to email the person who was talking about my spelling purly because i am dislexic, hmm cant even spell that lol

but truthfully i rely on word's spelling search and thats it, i cant see when something is spelt wrong so i would have asked if you would like to go through my story/s and correct them.

thanks x

1. "you cumming" = you're cumming.

2. "your beginning to beg" = you're beginning to beg.

3. "the bass of your cock" = the base of your cock.