All Comments on 'Cumming home'

Please update it was getting so good why stop there? You had my going I was getting good and wet...💦

What?! Where's the rest??? Damn, you left me high and dry.

Well, actually high and wet, but yeah..

I agree..what a let down

Finish the story before you publish it. So frustrating.

Needs part two and make story longer and let the tension build😉

too short and sex part where was it ???

where's the rest of it

WE WANT MORE !!!!

Don't listen to the critics! This is great, a Wonderful Fantasy! Please write more!

NOW PLEASE TELL US THE REST OF THE STORY!

I think the beginning of the story is perfect. You've created some wonderful characters and set up a very vivid situation. Well done.

My only criticism is that it seems that when you start talking about the sibling attraction it becomes slightly more base than the rest of the text. Regardless, you write beautifully and should certainly continue. Good job.

I think the beginning of the story is perfect. You've created some wonderful characters and set up a very vivid situation. Well done.

My only criticism is that it seems that when you start talking about the sibling attraction it becomes slightly more base than the rest of the text. Regardless, you write beautifully and should certainly continue. Good job.

would have been much better with out the orgies and lies almost bad enough for the group or fetish area

Great start, I really enjoyed reading it. This story needs to be continued, please do so.