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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Excellent first attempt.

Good story, which is most important. Please get an editor, there were errors of basic English as well as gender slips, which interferred with the flow of the story. Don't let it (or comments) discourage you. Keep writing!

Scotsman69Scotsman69about 13 years ago
The minor flaws

can be corrected as you gain experience. What impressed me about this tale was the inventive dirty carnality of the writing. More please.

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