by algeta39
I too have had thoughts of this sort of thing, schoolgirl punishment attracted me from a young age but I dont think i cd go through with it like in the story. i would love to try though.
This reads like a real life account of something that really happened and I assume it is. Full of admiration for all concerned for having the courage to acknowledge their innermost desires and fulfill their fantasies. I think this is probably the best I've ever read anywhere and if the author isn't writing commercially I suggest they should give it a try. There are several publishers that specialize in erotic fiction written by and for women.I'm a man actually but I think it's easier for female erotic writers to get published, and paid for it, these days.
good story line...put urself into charicter, but not to strongly... all in all very fine work......just not quite 100 worthy......but close
Very traditional scene, but well written. Carol discussed her feelings in response to her punishments. Could have been divided into two or more chapters, but well worth the time to read
Very readable. Very brave to face her fear and curiosity. I would like to see a sequel if there is one,