by BobbiR
I loved the slow build up ... and the sex was well written. (I'm not usually a fan of MFF or FMF ... but, this was done well and was very hot!)
At first I was a bit skeptical, thinking to myself, "nah, there's no way a 19-year-old girl could be that clueless about sex." But upon reconsideration, ten years, shut up in a religious boarding school? Yeah, I can believe it. You had some really nice build-up here and the sex scenes were lucid and powerful. My only criticism is that I was a bit put off by repeated words and phrases (like all the "she smiled") early on. Other than that, a killer story.
Perverted and talentless ! "1*" !!
Lovely premise.
As slow as the buildup was, it could have slower.
Ending, with his cock in her pussy was rushed.
No playing with his balls? Why?
Nevertheless, five stars.