by MVPrimetime
1. It's about time someone spelt Mum the right way.
2. Dealing with a 'difficult' subject and you handled it well, IMO.
Thank you
HP
It is nice to hear a kind word. Actually I had started a different story, about. An older man and a young woman he had cared for but got bogged down, then started this story, and then went back to the other one - each time resolving various difficulties. So I ended up with two stories, and I decided to post both - the other one is called "Accidents". I would be interested to hear how you think they compare - I spell "Mum" correctly in it too!
You have written about the uncomfortable stuff involved with relationships between people of different ages, and you have done it remarkably well. I thought everything that happened in the story was completely believable, and quite pleasant as well!
Keep up the great work!
This is one of the best stories I've read here. Really good (and hot) writing!