All Comments on 'Curtain Twitcher Ch. 02'

Great story - and great storytelling. Really look forward to hearing how Kirsty responds to her new found desire in the next chapter . . .

breathless - that's how good it was!

I love this story and the intense chemistry. Absolutely cannot wait to read more. This line sums it up perfectly "my breathing echoing heavily off the walls".

I really like the way you portray the two contrasting characters, and also Kirsty's "shall-I-shan't-I" conflict and the turbulent times she's having with her husband. Good compact stuff, and I can picture both characters....which kind of gets me wondering what my neighbours are doing....

You were on the floor...so was I. Looking for more. Wow!

Lovely, so well written. One of the very best descriptions of woman's desire,