All Comments on 'Curtain Twitcher Ch. 03'

I love the fact that Kristy's impatience had her in such a state that when she was finally with Lara, she became the one in control. A great story and well written.

So good to see you back on the site! And with such a hot new chapter, too. Thank you!

If you want a penis, get a man.

I just don't understand a woman with a fake penis that has no sensation. First two stories were excellent. This one not so much.

Lara hurting Kristy in the stall - is that love?

Because the only person interested in the sensation of your penis is you. Why should I have to settle for what you have when a girl can wear any cock I want?

So pleased to see Chapter 3 - and it exceeded expectations, so well done Saucy. Looking forward to developments in Chapter 4.

Your characterization is flawless, I really feel like I could meet this kind of people in RL. Plot, build-up, sex parts...everything is so realistic and refreshing. It's not about love, it's about lust triggered by a midlife crise, sense of neglegence, and a need for a release. This is just perfect. I hope we'll see the next part soon enough.

Who wouldnt fall under the spell of a Lara next door? For one cold moment, I thought Lara's keen interest in her voyeurism was because the mystery male was her husband! However sex in a pub(lic) loo is so electrically sexy! But this resolved warmly, with roles asserted into their proper, alluring order .

as they say turn about is fair play

I thoroughly enjoyed all three chapters. It was blistering hot. I was elated when Kirsty had the power towards the end. Just wonderful.

Loved this sexy story and the way you developed it through all chapters. It would have been nice though to read several more chapters with Lara stealing Kristy away from her husband and then having Lara gain complete control over Kristy for several chapters of steamy sex between the two. You should start the new year out by writing more sexy lesbian stories, nice talent.

The most erotic thing I’ve ever read. Certainly got my cock twitching. Wish I could have been there!

It seems like more fun when they’re on the same level. Give and take and all that. Nicely crafted. 😎

So hot! Great story-telling, fabulous sex!

Only small point is the layout of dialogue. I think to avoid confusion, descriptive phrases should go with the speaker/words to which they relate:

Her lips quirked. 'I see. It's like that is it?'

I eased myself gently into her; her eyes closed and she let out a sigh.

'Go on,' I said.

She opened her eyes. 'All right. Please.'

'Please what?'

'Pleade Kirsty. Please fuck me. Please make me come.'

I felt my....

Вау. Неожиданно сменился вектор в отношениях. Что же будет дальше. Вот бы узнать продолжение.

You are such a marvelous discover. I really admire how quickly you are able to drop into the story, small details still painting a wider picture and hidden depth. Fucking jelly.

It gets better, you write so well and make it so believable. I sometimes wish I could make love to a woman as a woman.

A little too "cute" for my tastes.

I'm nit sure Kirsty was the one really being manipulated.

I think perhaps it was us.

Hot. Loved the voyeurism! Can't wait to show my wife. Keep up the good work!

The build of sexual tension throughout the three chapters was sublime. I especially liked how Kirsty turned the tables on Laura at the end of the story. Brilliant!