All Comments on 'CvsN 28: Robin's Revelation'

we want more

Grizzly Bears & Mountian Lions stake their claims to square acreage. Jack had done it with his two primary women . There are a few wild cards like Cathy . Robin & Arnie that are in play to get turned over& livingly soiled and despoiled but there's a atmosphere of satiation & well being that pervades this story .

As a fan & a reader of this series , I confess to being restless for a crisis or challenge to fully engage Jack & his harem. Whether it be vocational or erotic - the current status qup is an embarressment of riches. Where are the villian on the order like John ( Debbie"s ex ) to hiss at ? What if Chris's husband became cognizant of her & Jack's fling ?

There's a reason why fairy tales conclude with " & they lived happily ever after " & don't go into the hour by hour mechanics of that lovely status quo. I'm just sayin' ...

I love how you had such a crazy sex scene and made it sweet between him and Debbie. Also so happy you are back to writing the story. You keep writing, and i'll keep voting.

I'm glad to see you back writing this story! I didn't feel like you had ended it well before and I like how you created some avenues for continued writing. keep up the good work and I will continue reading.

Waited a long long time since I read chapter 1.

The fans need more

Great series started ch1 on Friday finished ch28 on Sunday keep it up at least one more chapter.

The scene with Debbie was the hottest I have read in years. Now I have to shut my computer down so it can cool off.

What's next?!!

I hope you continue this story line - it's great

If all the previous story was nothing but buildup for this one scene, to make it that incredibly hot as it was, and provide it with plausible denial for disbelief suppression, it was all totally worth it.

Great read, great writing, great everything. Love it to bits & pieces. I'm in love with Deb, if she were real I think Jack would have to worry about me LOL.

...Finaly, exhaustion and perhaps new rules are making Jack more responsible, after this last round of raw sex, so well written.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!