All Comments on 'Cycle'
by Erich_Norden
- 8 Comments
DevilOrAngelabout 15 years agoReally nicely done Erich :-) Liked the descriptions of the creature and the entire flow of the story :-) Good luck on the contest
Jack_Samuelabout 15 years agoIts a very well written piece Erich and good luck in the contest. I think your descriptions and emotions are fantastic but i would have liked to see more from Moort
Erich_Nordenabout 15 years agoAuthorI actually did include acknowledgements in the notes when I submitted this, and was under the impression that they would appear publicly. My apologies. I will submit an edit shortly. :)
KillerRomanceabout 15 years agoEnjoyed it even if I DID read it the second time around. The prospect of her giving birth to a potato-like thing still gets to me, though. -shudders- <3 L.
TE999about 15 years agoThis tale was both well written and commendably descriptive. It engenders sympathy for both characters making their eventual coupling and the birth of a new creature more poignant. Good luck in the contest.
PrincessErinabout 15 years agoA very well written story but definitely weird and disturbing. Fits well with the contest though. Good luck.
