All Comments on 'Cynthia's Box Ch. 02'

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The Owners of a Palatial Mansion puts the Couple who is there to design some Architectual changes through their paces. Sexual that is. If you're into total debauchery - this story's for you.

This story certainly had some problems, such as long paragraphs and grammatical errors. However, it also had a fascinating little plot and plenty of hot, group sex too. The shock at the end was nice as well. In terms of exciting the reader, well, it succeeded with this Reviewer. I don't know who was sexier, Judith or Cynthia, and I would definitely have wanted both of them. It deserved a 4, I think. The problems were glaring, but the orgy was hot enough to prevent a 3.

I dont often like mixed groups but I loved this. I think it was very well done and flowed well between the activities. The characters were all having a great time and so was I.

Loved your two part story, especially the bisexual, hot anal aspect. Made me very, very hard. Thank you.

Love

Ricky

xxx

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