All Comments on 'Daddy! Ch. 02'

Almost as unbelievable as chapter one. Too fast - no build up. Take it slower and draw it out before the sex comes in. Daddy and daughter teasing each other until they can't help themselves, that's the way to make a story HOT. The end of this chapter suggests Daddy is about to visit her. Make her wait. Flash Dad at every opportunity. Spy on him (and Mom). Have Dad spy on her.

This was really good. I might have had the dad and girl touch right there at the end when he is cumming in the mother.