All Comments on 'Daddy Gets a Late Visitor'

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emaalremaalrover 16 years ago
not quite sure....

I can score this easily as obviously you're able to write, the content or story I am really a little uncomfortable about.

I did read it through though and wasn't about to go anon.

oldwayneoldwayneover 16 years ago
You Can Write...but

I think I agree with the previous comment. I also found the content to be a bit difficult to appreciate.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
"Daddy it's so big" Don't you guys ever

grow up??

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Lol, before he starts fucking her silly he needs to spank her ass good, long and hard for slutting around every night, then drag her to the clinic and have her tested for diseases, then to a gyno and have her checked out and put on bc, THEN haul her to AA meetings, then take her home and fuck her, lol.

She is definitely a piece of work! ...but then again her dad is too for putting up with her out boozing and slutting!

Fun read though, lol.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

I'm not a prude but it was bothering me to know that my 31 years old daughter was sucking off every Tom, Dick or Harry that she came home with and I didn't know what to do. '

....ummm, tell her to A. Quit being a fucking slut and/or whore. She's either making money doing it, or doing it to pay her dinner/drinks for the evening tab. Either way both apply I suppose. She needs to stop the bullshit and I don't need the virtual ==>Diseased Ho Inside<== sign hanging out front!!

' "Just a blowjob, that's not sex Daddy." She said and I simply couldn't believe what I was hearing. '

...uuuh, yah moron, it is. ...and what passive fuck is daddy? Daaamn! Hell, by the third blowjob, that shit would stop!

' "Can I touch it Daddy, it's so big." '

What, are you kidding? I know where those hands have been! Not to mention that mouth! No telling what you've caught in the last month!

' She had always had nice breasts from being 13 years old but I had rarely seen them again until she was in her early twenties and then she believed in being topless for bed, or whenever she sunbathed in the backyard even if I was there. It was pointless trying to dissuade her so I gave up and let her do what she wanted. '

Who runs that house anyways!? She prolly gets by with a meth lab in the garage too, heh.

' "Listen Daddy, I'm very, very sorry about last night, can you please forgive me? Please don't kick me out, I promise I'll be much better in the future and respect your bedtimes. If you get a few cases of beer in the house, maybe I'll stay home at nights and be with you '

Well the first thing we're doing is checking you into alcohol rehab! One that has an AA and an SA program, lol!

' "Why? Because that's what I really like to do Daddy, to suck off a man and swallow all his juices. But now I've found a man that really turns me on. YOU DADDY. '

You mean the jig is up so you're trying to have your cake and eat it too, all under the same roof! You've pissed off the free room and board sucker by overlapping the free club and booze suckers and now you're trying to consolidate!!

We're Going to the doctor tomorrow and get you drug tested, STD tested, then on birth control. Then to an AA meeting, daily,

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

31yr old trash whoring daughter who can't support herself. This father should kick the slut out

Marklynda2Marklynda24 months ago

Yep, wrapped around her little finger and yet he, and apparently she, wants her wrapped around his something else! A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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