All Comments on '"Daddy?" I Whispered'

I only wish I was married to such a women, a daughter, a love like this. In my early years I did not want children, now I love watching other parents enjoying theirs. Life means changes but true love never goes away, it just becomes a warm memory. Here, with the love between a father and his daughter it last forever.

It was great and only my own preferences kept me from giving it a 5. I wish it had included at least one anal act.

Dude. Normally don't vote or comment but seeing all your comments I had to comment. I'm 100% not racist. Actually I have close 50% Native-American on 1 side. The other side is a weird mix of German, guess Redneck (not sure exactly where from, just yrs in southern states & NC. There all flat ass area where you see farmland for what seems 100 miles in all directions. Yet NC & another in the mountains, guess we are rednecks & hillbillies?), then Fench & a couple others. So 1 side mostly Native-American, other side Mutt. Seeing it's 15 years later, the guy say Latino's would be running the country & whatever else, well you didn't see Trump becoming President! Actually if anyone 15 yrs ago said they could see that, they'd be in a rubber room. My family has Mexicans, African-American's, gays & tons more in it! I don't agree with the gay's but, that's a religion issues not that I hate them or wish harm. Just wish they would be in a man & woman relationship. Before any comments, yes I grasp incest issues are against religion too. Not something I'd act on I just enjoy the stories that have plots, actually have build up (not the dad came in bang me the end or brother banged me the end. Now that I've dragged out my comment, here's my point! 1. It was a damn dream for 1. If she's young & says it about a dream, she gets a half pass. 2. Most all Arabs are uncircumcised! 3. I got to parachute a few times, fast rope several times, walk a shitload, & drive, be a passenger in or sit on, hang on to & other things to numerous vehicles! That said most Arabs I encountered stunk, didn't bathe, had beards, weren't circumcised (only know because they were nude, tagged, fingerprinted, retina scanned & more! I on one side for 50% of them feel sorry for some of them, wish they had help & more. The other 50% I wish we used large weaponry, leveled it all & let the Bezos & Walton assholes build Walmart's & Amazon shopping stores, shipping fulfilment factory's & wtfe! Then they'd have jobs! Outsourcing call centers was great! We now get some things answered & fixed or we can't understand who we are talking to, get credit cards info stolen & much more. Thank you India, Jamaica, China, Russia & more! Also not a huge flag flier either. Fought for the men beside me in our 5 to 11 person units, unless we met up with men & woman in battalions, on ships, on bases & more, then it was all them. Never the Prez, Congress, Pentagon, pencil pushers & many other assholes! I dislike Arabs that do cut of heads because you are white or black or female or American or innocent workers trying to assist them or just because that's what they fucken do daily! They say WE all look alike! Myself white, my brother being African-American, a woman & many other look TOTALLY different, with different views & more. Even more ironic some are Muslims, & they are white, black, male, female & others! Point is depending on which ones, fuck em! Again it was the dream of a white, blonde, young girl, in a incest story, that's fictional & hell the list goes on. As for breaking it down to Klan or Nazis or wtfe, hell at most the author is racist or maybe not? Maybe he served, maybe he's ignorant. Can we say it's just a fucking story! Pretty hot story! Dad need a little more internal struggle & a couple little more things. The rape, if she becomes a doctor, she's highly educated. When pretending to be younger she just stated a group off ppl. Hell if it was racist then he'd jump to African-American ppl like most racist assholes do!

I wish I could write like that! Wow! Beautiful form and grammar.

I have read this story so many times over! I love, love, love, love your writing. I wish you were still writing.

I love it, course this kind of relationship has been going on since the first Homo sapiens appeared on this planet 4.5 million years ago, more common than u all think, not just father and daughters, amongst other related family members too, 1st, 2nd cousins, etc

This shit is racist

Racist? Don't think so. Those were youg girl nightmares, valid ones, possibly biased by public events and preconcepts. By all means I liked it.

RACIST and not ok!

In the early part of her seduction she made the mistake of talking to the Dr about her school friends lusting for him. This would be bound to unsettle him, the good name of a professional man is easily lost especially with a lustful daughter too intoxicated to think straight. This would unsettle the ambience and threaten success. For me, she was not together enough and for one of her supposed intelligence not sufficiently aware of the need to preserve his professional hauteur. She plainly could have brought a lot of damage onto his reputation unaware as she was of the issues. Her talking of uncircumcised Arabs would have instantly flagged with her father as a ploy for long cuddles in bed and a need to stay by her. In fact, nothing happened to her. There were no Arabs. He would know about the importance of circumcision among such peoples. He would have been aware of the direction of travel at that point and simply let the future roll out, and helping the roll out by leaving Steffi in charge of the holiday arrangements.

Ideally, she would be more grown up and able to show that she was aware of the issues, preserving his dignity, but who, when they were alone, simply melted and became Steffi.

If I was Daddy I would be feeling a great deal of foreboding until we got clear away from the US. The wedding could almost be seen as blackmail. He was very much in her power at that point and as a scorned women could have brought a trainload of trouble to him.

The pearls were a nice touch. They bring sophistication and so would tend to help the illusion that she was a few years older.

So very well written! I have had nightmares of being raped by middle eastern men also. Nothing against their race at all!!!! I love your style. So romantic. Duch a great fantasy!!!!

Racist. Blatantly, completely, and for no actual reason really. Why would someone actually write that out. Ew

I liked this story though the first 2 pages were long and boring but the arab part FUCK YOU HOW DARE You

Racist

Yeah I couldn't read past the blatant racism to words middle easterners. Like wtf, the first thing she thought to say was she had a bad dream about "ugly Arabs raping her because she's a blonde, pretty American & Christian?!?!" This is just like white women falsely accusing black men of the same thing. You just lost a reader and I hope many more if this is your writing style.

Why are you racist towards middle eastern people?

I liked all of the story just as it was written. So hot. Could see a chapter or two, following the good doctor’s vacations and pregnancies. Would be so hot.

This was an absolutely amazing story it had me rubbing my clit like crazy, but the part about the Arabs was so messed up. Your story would’ve been amazing without that

I really loved your story. You did what you had too go win him over.

Sex with your Father is warm and beautiful. Many people do it, but hide their love. But look how beautiful your love for each other turned out.

Please tell us more. Such fabulous sex with him, being pregnant with his baby. So beautiful

That was a beautiful story. I only wished I had that lind of relationship with my own dad. ❤️

This is the second time that I have read this story. It's a great story. True love without the judgements of other people. I wish my own daughter was like that.

Why does racism have to be your go to word. Would it make it less racist if the rapists were Americans? Or Germans? Or Asians? For fucks sake, get over yourself (ves) and pay attention. The Arabs weren’t the focus of the story. But you, in your pathetic little minds decide that political correctness outweighs the story. Dreams can be haunted by something as simple as a movie. If she’d dreamt that Freddy Kruger was the one raping, which “ism” would you have made reference to? Instead of looking at the bigger picture, that being a loving relationship between two adults, you run screaming because of a few fictional character references. Get over yourself. Try paying attention to what matters. Better yet, show your name along with your criticism, instead of hiding behind the mask of anonymous. If political correctness is your problem, you’re obviously reading at the wrong site. You’re part of the problems humanity faces today, and also part of the reason I detest admitting I’m one of you, with regard to being human.

I would've fucking loved this story, but the whole Arab fake dream was bullshit. You can't be racist like that.

Like others have said, the xenophobia and Islamophobia ruined the entire story for me. Also, the majority of Arabs *do not* circumcise their children. Too bad you're a racist, as the rest of the story had promise.

Wonderfully written, please more like this........thanks

Truly inspiring, loving relationship. Gustav Flaubert was quoted with; “Language is a cracked kettle on which we beat out tunes to make bears dance to, while all the time we long to move the stars to pity.” He was indicating that our words are never completely understood by others. But Scouries has found that perfect combination of prose to express a captivating love story between two people, that transcends the limits of societal standards, and has the whimsical splendor of a real life fantasy. Heartfelt applause and cheers!

Oh PHUCK YES!!! So hot ! more please?

I really enjoyed most of this story and it would have been a five for me, except I just can't commit to five stars for a story that gives a perfect blonde little girl a fake nightmare about "dirty, smelly uncircumcised Arab/foreigner rapists who hate me because in American" it was so completely outside the realm of necessity, and so blatantly racist that it actually ruined the story for me. I don't care how nice and sweet someone is on the surface, if they think of "foreigners" that way, they're just not good people.

Also lol@the anonymous guy bitching about the other people who commented anonymously. If y'all don't see stereotyping people based on a nationality or skin color as racist then you're definitely the idiots perpetuating it.

So the story ad good plot, I enjoyed its build up to when he finally let loose but the issue that stuck out to me the most was the BLATANT prejudice and racism towards Arab people, you could've just said they were bad men trying to hurt her, calling their uncircumcised penis's disgusting, and even describing the Arab people as disgusting Arabs will never sit right with me, there was no need for it and I have a feeling that comes from a deep place of internalized racism. Work on that.

This story was amazing except the racist part. You could have described the evil men in a different way without including race. Just a bit of advice.

A well-told story, even the flashbacks worked fairly well. I was a bit put off by the Arab references. But the entire piece was redeemed totally by the delightful phrase "gate to my womb". Thanks. A five.

where do these inbred morons called anonymous get the racist BS from... I read the story and enjoyed every word and I didnot see anything of the sort... I think these people play with their puds... Jealous of you because they are incapable of writing a good story... Keep up the good work and piss on the anonymous people.

dukeofearl@gmx.com

Your story is awesome except the absolutely vile racist comments. There was no need to describe the race or the "uncircumcised" penis, you could have left it at "they were disgusting men"

Everything was going so well until you had to bring that racist BS into it. All those racist statements were a little too specific, almost as if you hold those yourself. You could have painted the “bad men” as vile without factoring race into it. The fact that you think you HAD to bring up their race means you believe being Arab is vile. Also the “uncircumcised” part made me laugh. That’s like saying a bunch of Jews are uncircumcised. It’s not even factually accurate. Good job reinforcing racist narratives that gave your story no addd benefit. Gross.

wow, did you write this with the hopes of spreading disgusting racist garbage to people who just wanted an enjoyable dirty story?

Jesus.

Incest is actually kinda my fetish. What is making me "click away" is the unnecessary aryan superiority espoused by the the girl and unrefuted by her dad.

What sucks is, I like your writing, a lot.

I wonder if Daddy will end up having sex with his new daughters. He is still young enough!

In spite of the incredibly eco-centric personality of the daughter, I enjoyed the daughter and her taking hr father for life. The little nightmare story was merely a distraction, and could have been deleted without losing anything. Thanx for the Read, even after all these years,

I really enjoyed this story, pretty well done, but the racism factor was just so unnecessary, and really gross. I would have loved to give the author a higher score, hopefully in the future they will realize racism makes a good story bad, not the other way around.

It was really well written but had totally unneccesary racism

I love occasionally rereading this story, it's always so delicious and amazing! The author really did a spinning, erotic fairytale with this one!

I wish folks would just read the story and understand the context and tense of the story and quit screaming racist over that one bit. Ugh. If she had said any other 'race' somebody would complain, however if she had said something like ' big, ugly, fat and smelly white guys' nobody would make a damned peep.

The POINT of it was to use more descriptive and colorful wording to increase her Daddy's protective nature. Neither the girl, or author need be racist here, and most likely aren't. Someone will disagree. So is the author racist if he's Arabic and writing about raping little blonde white girls? Aaah. Quit assuming you know about the author, his or her intent or beliefs and forcing your one size fits all opinion on the world, expecting everyone to change things just because you don't like something. Hell, you sit here reading stories that you enjoy yet there are lots of others with 'opinions' just like yours that would like to see them all disappear. Think hard before you speak and try and look at the bigger picture. Not that much to ask.

I really enjoyed every piece of this story. Very interesting, it's so unusual but wish I could see myself in that scenario for real.

My husband is Arabic, from Egypt. I loved the rest of the story but the "nightmare" really really pissed me off.

This story had amazing potential, until the racist garbage in the “nightmare”. So disappointing.

I need to be fucked by daddy

French isn't a race it's a nationality, and they're known for their rudeness, (along with surrendering to the Germans), esp to Americans.

Really? You're reading incest porn, yet you're complaining about racism? Really?

I loved your story so much, I have been thinking endlessly about my Daddy who is no longer with me, I can remember being 22 standing over him wishing, It never happened. your story brought my dreams to a lovely climax. Thank you x

She didn’t seem very smart to begin with, and almost all, if not all, med programs accept people after a bachelors degree not straight out of high school. This part of the story was the most ridiculous thing, with the details of her dream and her baby talk too over the top. Story was good, writing was good, but a little more research or a character that would be believable to be accepted into led school straight out of high school would be more realistic. That’s all. .

Is bijna een copie van onze beleving! Twee schattige dochtertjes hebben we eraan overgehouden. Mijn dichter mijn mooie lieve vrouw

This racist, and so typically American BS, crap -

"They wanted to rape me Daddy, despoil me because I'm an American.... "

- should not be permitted here. Just who the fuck do you think you are?

It was good at the end but the way the girl was written was a little much. She got accepted to Harvard yet she’s apparently as dumb as a box of rocks. That and the constant “daddy” kind of killed it for me, reminds me of those cheesy 2 hour porn movies no one can ever get through.

I mean it was kinda hot towards the end but what the fuck

The 'ugly Arab men' comment was just to push her daddy's protective buttons. It doesn't make it racist. The ugly descriptor, well she could hardly say she was being raped by handsome Arab men, then daddy would have thought she was having a fantasy and just jerking his chain. Hehe. She could have said ugly black men, jewish men, polish men, irish men, white men (overly generic) etc. people NEVER give it a second thought if it's a description of anybody else, then get all 'offended' if they fit in the box. People are too damned sensitive these days. I'm Polish, btw, so you can imagine the shit I've heard in my life, hehe! If it's not aimed at me personally I don't easily get offended. 99.9% of the time there's no hate or malice involved.

i was getting really horny until you mentioned the ugly Arab men. I am Arab and that was racist. Also, they are all circumcised. but i did cum after all so thanks good stuff.

I really enjoyed this story . I felt it had the proper amount of Everything . 5 Stars from me ..

This was a beautiful and really sexy story, thanks!! I just hope your husband knows, accepts and enjoys the loving relationship you have with your father. Your husband willing sharing you with your daddy is a forever love. You can have them independently and sometimes enjoy both your daddies together, inside you at the same time. Having your two favorite men, your two daddies, both cumming inside your pussy, their come mixing together in their naughty little girl, you will never come better. Then all three of you sleep in the same bed, having a daddy on your either side.

I loved the story overall. However, I was really turned off at times by the Racism and racial stereotypes. You're a good enough writer to not have to force that part in there. The "Blonde, Christian, American" emphasis just made it hurt worse.

Wow, I think the suspense, the dance between the daughter's willingness and the father's reluctance, was amazing and made this story much more exciting!

I loved it. Sounds like it could have been real. I liked the reluctance of Daddy at first, and then his gentle forcefulness in the end. Well done

I'm curious... this sounds like it could have been a POSSIBLE sequel to "Ohhh...Mommy," I Groaned... just curious if that was done on purpose...

Just a well crafted, classy story that had me interested and entertained, start to finish. When I read stories I try to get a mental picture of the players, and I had a strong mental picture of Stephanie to go along with the story

A beautiful livestory

This is a truly wonderful presentation of expressed love and finally expressed and realized deep love and admiration. A daughter and father who have realized their love can only be satisfied by mutual acceptance.

Thanks for your beautiful story.

Great and really interesting story. I like it.

This story is really a great one. I love how it ended. You wrote one amazing story thank you.

To the blah blah why the racist nightmare blah blah complainers.....shut the fuck up bitch, ain’t nobody give a half a shit if your feelings are hurt or you lost your little throb for a moment. It’s scouries story to tell.... go cry elsewhere. You sit here and attempt to judge it like you are some fancy wine connoisseur. Spoiler alert, you are not. You are, in fact, just another reader of taboo smut. Perhaps very giftedly written smut albeit.

Thanks for writing for us and sorry for the other childish bitches on here.

Very well-written and detailed. Certainly worth reading.

like

Love sooo much

Fuck you’re boring...

Scouries, you’re the best author on this site!

I read this story about ten years ago, and was dumbfounded at 1) its cavalier, non sequitur and unnecessary use of an ugly racist trope and 2) the author’s obvious lack of research/knowledge about Harvard medical school admission. Neither were needed for the plot. But it’s disturbing that, in nearly 13 years this story has been on the site, the author has never amended/updated the outdated, offensive, bigoted motif of Steff’s “nightmare” ... Especially since the “nightmare” wasn’t real, and never comes up again in the story!

How did everyone they knew accept them as married when they knew them as father and daughter?

This story is so well-written, for the most part, and I was completely in the moment as I read. Unfortunately, the weird and unexpected racist blurb about Arab men with “smelly beards” who hate blonde American Christians took me out of the story. I continued reading, but never quite shook the nonchalant use of a racist trope. I understand that this is a piece of fiction, but that doesn’t mean it shouldn’t be held to high standards. Relying on racist descriptions to move your plot along is simply lazy writing. The stories we tell matter. How we tell them matters.

Hands up, the best story of any theme I've ever read.

This story seemed to be so real that it was a pleasure to read. It was not the raw sex

of most incest stories, but the true love of the family relationship.

Loved every heartbeat, both hers and mine. With her father giving in so easily, it's obvious that she had so tempted him with little flashes of her bottom and her nipples to the point of no return. Very few men could reject such temptation especially if their daughters are attractive.

Thank you for the pleasant journey.

What a beautiful story with superb pacing and strong depictions of father and daughter. There are numerous grammar errors which means that you didn't have someone edit it before you posted it. Nevertheless it earned the high praise it received.

so close to as it is when things are right and running well

it had me on the edge of my seat.

Congrats! ;)

Dude, what are you being racist for? The story would have been much better if you did not put that racist crap in there. I am not arabic but it makes me so angry when I see racism, a HUGE turnoff.

I thoroughly enjoyed the story. Some descriptive words were a bit much but nothing that broke the immersion.

For the people calling racist BS, a teenage girl inventing a story off the top of her head to throw off suspicions of why she's sleeping with her father? Yeah I probably couldn't do better. Characters are not always indicators of the authors opinions.

I couldn't read past the racist B.S. What a way to ruin what could have been a good story.

Very thoughtful and interestingly written, A report of the most intimate erotic feelings of that young lady were beautifully dialogued. A happy ending for a perfect story.

Who can blame innocent American girls for being scared of the big bad arabs ? They are terrorists and rapists. He did not call them rag heads or goat fuckers, which I am inclined to do.

First of all it's FICTION. So if Steffie wants to invent a nightmare about some bad guys and they're Arabs, so what?

Second of all, it's 1994, so who should Steffie pick - the Russians?, the Germans?, the Chinese?, the Jews?, the Romans?

Third of all, what year was it that the Iranians took over the US Embassy and held 444 people as hostages? Oh, and their leaders referred to the United States as "the Great Satan"? Oh yeah, that was 1979!

Fourth of all, gee, was the movie "Taken" racist because the daughter was kidnapped to be sold to Arabs?

Quit being so fucking sanctimonious and politically correct!

The bullshit about Arabs killed the story. Pathetic.

Didn’t even bother to read past the Arab shit. I’m so fucking disappointed in this, so I had to comment and not usually ghost read like I do. This is racist bloody trash and it needs to stop. Absolutely agree w the one user below

Get your fucking shit together man and stop being a racist pig.

Pure dumb shit. "Oh the big bad Arabs hate us for being American" In 1994.

Stupid ass dumb racist white trash.

I am cun-fussed as to when the daughter knew she was pregnant . , is the only thing I would like to know , did he push thru her "cervix" , or just let nature take its course ?

Great from start to finish!

fulfilling human needs its very real

jen

This story has high hopes but there is no other real conflict for the heroine to overcome besides some vague societal taboo. Shakespeare would have been disappointed.

Most enjoyable and credible.

great story just needs more sex. along build for a short sex scene

You have not only fascinated me with your "attention to detail" so brilliantly delivered but with how you managed to make something so taboo become intriguing. I was hooked from the first line. This is the third story I've read on Literotica and this story alone is why I am now a long time member. Thank you. I am no longer ashamed of my own desires.

I thought it was a great story. Kept me thinking what would happen next. Keep up the great work

In 1994 the only international flight out of Pittsburgh was the daily British Airways flight to Gatwick.

A

Fun to read;

It was fun to read even tho we knew what would happen. A lot of excitement in her thoughts. As a man I would like to know, to think that in this day I could be loved that much, that strongly to someone that close..........Good job!

A (big) penis does help tho.......