All Comments on '"Daddy?" I Whispered'

Read it again after a year or two. Still a good story. A daughter's dream of Europe cumming truth.

Have you ever had the thought that he might feel attracted to your daughters in the future?

The word daddy is such a cringy word. Specially if it’s a grown ass adult using it

It's super amazing 😍😂 i love how she teases her daddy and i just love the ending 😍

Racist asshole. Nobody fucking cares if you're blond and white, get over it.

I enjoyed every single story I read thus far. I read most stories under Incest/Taboo and yours are by far hands down the best. Well that's my opinion. Sadly im almost done reading your stories. Im trying to savor them. I'm anticipating your next story. Can't wait to see what your beautiful mind comes up with next. I too am a writer, though my stories are more focused on Erotic Couplings. I do love the taboo nature of your father/daughter love stories. Scrath that all your stories. ;) Makes me want to know more about you. Yes i said it. To be in the presence of "scouries" would be a dream come true!!! Okay. Im done rambling. Don't ever stop writing. Ill enjoy reading every last one.

~Jess~

I love it. It's the perfect father/daughter love story. It has such a happy ending. So happy for the 2 of you.

I can only describe this as the PERFECT incest story !

incest children? incest wedding? racism? love the south...

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Your work on this piece was inspired, beautiful, and emotional. You expressed love and lust artfully. If not for the festering gangrenous cyst you used for your nightmare scene, I would gladly give you a five. However your completely gratuitous expression of racism distroyed an otherwise perfect story. While I think you were attempting to express the cultural bias of the time, it was in very poor taste, and unnecessary for the plot. Any nightmare would have worked, such as being chased through the woods by an unseen horror. Rocks cutting your feet as thorny branches tore at your night clothes. Eventually leaving you naked and bleeding as the horror closed in on you. Unless racism is at the core of the story itself, the subject has zero busness in a love story. Rework the nightmare scene and republish, then you will get your five.

You get a 5 from me, not because you asked for it, but because you worked your ass off for it. I don't mean the sex scenes, which were adequate, but I mean the use of language, which was superb. There was very limited dialogue in this story, which could have hurt it. However, your short monologues saved it, and moved the story along briskly. You used the part of the waiter bringing dinner into their suite, brilliantly. Instead of focusing attention on the old man, who is attempting to place plates on the table, without breaking them, She is using her beautiful young body, exposing herself to him, trying to get a rise out of her father.If that doesn't rate a 5/10/20, I don't know what does.

Racism ruined it

You should have continued with the exploration of your daughters inner depths with their father, their ages are perfect for the story to have continued

The Arab bit is just, no. Just, stereotypes in stories are just shitty.

i love it,

I for one loved the comments about the mudslimes in the story. Also what a read! One of the better stories I've read in a long time.

The racism ruined it. Get a life .

wonderful

story

At least my 2nd or 3rd read- so well written! And "No" I did not find it racist - I am a realist- read the papers!

I absolutely love this story, very good job on the details. It definitely got me going.

The stuff about Arabs ruined the story, it made me think of Stephanie as a stupid asshole

Your racism is appalling, it was a huge huge turnoff

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Take my phone away see what I get get

How worried should you be is what he's playing who's marry how many times did he rape her what's the date

Jason an ass whole malachi

Story is lame Malachi written by Malachi 6/17/17 You didn't write this malachi

Who's jason

My first story I've read on this site. Definitely not into incest or condone it, your story tells how a woman's lust for someone can leave men in a very weak position about saying no..!!

Pete..!

One of the best stories of this genre I've read.

And yeah, back in the 90's, Political Correctness wasn't politically correct.

What the hell has happened to this Nation?

Oh yeah, all the PC Bullshit has fractured us as a nation.

Sad times, for all of us who remember when people had thicker skins.

I've never been politically correct & calling a spade a spade has never been an issue with me. What was said regarding race was quite true. Americans are hated in many other countries simply for being American. I am very fair skinned & have always been blond (until a few years ago following a surgical procedure) with green eyes. I lived in HI for 3 years and saw lots of discrimination against me because of my race. Not by the Samoans but by the Japanese predominately. I actually had women Refuse to wait on me in well respected establishments simply because I was a white woman. It's shocking to me how people can get offended at the dumbest things yet be accepting of what I would deem unacceptable behavior. Incest is not my thing but I had heard about your story & wanted to read it for myself to see what you offered as a writer. I do think you need to proof your stories a bit more before submitting as there were grammatical errors etc BUT The way you wrote was erotic!! If it hadn't been the incest relationship (as I said, not my thing) I would've given it a much higher rating than I did. As it was, your story affected me. The way you phrased and fit your words together had a very profound affect on my libido. I couldn't help but be aroused during the reading of your story. When I feel myself Pulse simply reading a story...it's a well put together erotic tale. I plan to read more of your stories and hope to find one that is right up my alley so to speak. Good luck on future endeavors and glad to hear your health has improved.

I just reread this story again - and will probably read it again and again. I only wish I had to ability to put in words how this story has grabbed me - pulled me into the lives of these two people. Thank you so much for another good read!

I'm from the south and have been around racism my whole life idk if I was just so into the story I didn't catch it but I didn't see any racism in this story. Please do keep writing you are a great author loved this story.

Fantastic would have given more stars if possible. The comments about the racism are uncalled for as this was written in a time when all the politically correct crap of today was nonexistent. Plus as a father of a 19 year old daughter ( who had tried to convince him from her 12th birthday to her 16th that he should take her virginity ( I finally gave her what she so badly wanted on her 16th birthday )) nothing would make me want to hold and protect my baby-girl then the thought of some dirty skeezy import trying to rape my little girl be it Arab, Mexican or Canadian!

to everyone who commented on the racism, the story was set moderately before people truly cared about racism. I thought it was fine in the story. (and btw I am not racist)

So.... a well written story and suddenly extreme racism. From nowhere... could not get though that part...

Racism was a bit uncalled for and unnecessary

We all must choose our own destiny. When we are true to our selves it always works

When we know we cannot lie to our self, our lives are potistive for other as well. And it was fun read as well. Thanks

That 'dirty, smelly arabs' raping the good white christian bit was uncalled for and totally off-putting. Probably shouldn't go looking for political correctness in this specific story genre but come on, racism was easily avoidable in this story but you decided to hammer it home

Great read; but could have done without the racism.

I just found this site and have been enjoying the story on here I will try to find more story write by u

The story was amazing and erotic I used this while I thought of my dad I felt as it dragged on too much for people who just want to read the sexual parts but it was very good, rated 5

Fantastic story I've gave you 5 stars well written would love to read more of your work

he was lucky to find a daughter as affectionate as her, I just wish there were a few more like her,, very good story well written,, keep at it,, would like to see more of your work.

Hate the racism. No need for such

The irrelevant and obvious anti-Arab racism and anti-non-circumsicion paragraph was entirely unnecessary and definitely detracted from your story. Otherwise I would have given 5 stars.

Really loved the story but (I'm white america female) the Arab references and the idea that a lack of cicumsision is dirty made me uncomfortable! Especially as the racism wasn't really relevant to the story or needed. I voted 4 stars as it's still great skilled writing but please don't make such references again!

Loved the story! Keep writing and I agree ..More of the "Fuck Me Daddy" as a woman I love that...and Daddy and his precious little girl...love love love!!!! GREAT STORY!!!

I caught a few racist stuff in this story.

Arabs raping her because she was american? fuck you and your little blondie 🖕🖕🖕

I loved your story. One of the best I've ever read. Don't ever stop writing. Only suggestion I could think of would be, more "oh, daddy fuck me!" Lines. Girls like myself reel over lines like that.

What a great story!

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Thank you!

This was a beautiful love story, and I think that the pacing was just fine. The author describes the love, passion, and sex with vivid and compelling prose. While incest may not be desirable in the real world, it's a potent aphrodisiac in the realm of fantasy. Having said that, who knows? Maybe there are rare occasions when soul mates are born into the same family. As far as I'm concerned, more power to them....as long as they don't have kids. After all, it's hard to argue against the realities of reproductive genetics between two closely related partners.

Arabs raping her? Total American. But the story was good.

Well, I hated how slowly it moved.

At least for each other from the time they traveled Europe. You asked, and get my five stars.

I really liked a lot of the interractions. I've gained quite the facination with incest recently, and I've known a few people who have gone further with it. I wish I could have been like that with my dad once hee.

My main point of criticism is, apart from a few errors, I really don't like children being born out of incest. Especially as a doctor, the father should know better than to have children with such a limited gene pool. But as a fantasy, it works ok, it just felt tacked on at the end as a consequence of unprotected sex.

Love it.... this is my dream and hope that someday it comes true

Could you fucking take out the racist shit about "arabs" omgggg

You'd prefer a '5' would you? Well, I've read everything on here under "scouries" and I've given almost everything a '5'. Not that ALL of them are my favorite stories. Other authors write some good ones too. Susanjillparker is one of the others and beachbum1958. Lovecraft68, Klxro (I think it is) all are really good. But I have enjoyed almost all of yours. You write erotic romances. The one about Angie and her Valentine day with the evil Italian named Scouries. Oooh mommy.... I groaned. And of course this. And I like it that the Daddy is not the aggressor. It can seem suspiciously like he is taking advantage of a position of authority if Daddy comes to Daughter and he seduces her. What is she supposed to say to the man who treats her like a princess, that fights her battles, loves her at all costs? She will say, "Yes", of course and that is not fair - even in fantasy. I like how she falls in love with him over a period of months, even years before she realized it, and even in her youth she was able to use her feminine wiles to capture her man and make him hers. She took her time and knew what she was doing and what she wanted. Not as a virgin, she knew also what she did not want, which is just as important to such a large decision. Yes, this is very good and not the first time I've read it. I think I'll read about Angie and her short stories and lingerie now.......

Five stars for a PERFECT lusty true love story with daddy and his little girl. Bravo :) I wish I had a dad like this xx much love xx keep writing!! Xx regards - Danielle

Congratulations and thank you! A beautiful account of what is clearly a subject close to your heart. I imagine that you, like me, have a daughter of your own whom you would love to be 'closer' to.

The insightful and sensual narative throughout pages one and two truly had me relating to both Steffanie and her father. The explosive passion of their inevitable union was fantastic and excited me like no erotic story I'd read before.

My only slight criticism, on a technical note, is regarding a few punctuation errors. However, I couldn't give you work less than a 5-star rating on those grounds.

Well done, and thank you again.

if only I knew where to find a daughter like her.. heaven is was she is, and she is somehow an angel, in more ways than one.. a very good story, well thought out, and presented.. please don't stop writing ,, I do hope there is more of your story's to come. again well done ,, from meerkat888@btinternet.com

Way too racist with the "evil Arabs/ good American Christians" thing.

Just as enjoyable and entertaing as the first time I read it. It is correctly in the incest catagory. However, it is definitely a great romance story just as the story "Colleen" is by Texas Refugee.

Outstanding story. I love the way she took her time, plotted her attack and it all unfolded in all places, Paris. How romantic and erotic. The way she engulfed him for the first time to feel what she'd been wanting for months, and months. This was a very good story. WHEN WILL THERE BE MORE?

This is life. The hart wants what the hart wants.I like the way the story unfolds.I think you could put in a chapter on a bad experience that happens in real life,like some one who could not except Father an daughter relationship !

Delightful reading of your five star story of a trip for a daughter who employs love and lustful romance for her father. The trip to Paris and the rest of Europe seemed to be to fast and hurried to end the story. Still it was a delight to read.

I was masturbating furiously reading this.

So sexy and literary wise it was talented.

I loved the sex scene and the scenes leading up to it. God, did I cum!!!!

Thanks for writing and keep writing!!!😉

You are clearly a delightful and erudite woman with a nice balance of sexuality passion and literary technique! Keep writing my dear, your talent is greatly appreciated!

gawwwwd hot and sexy love forbidden relationships too damn hot...totaly mind blowing awsome

I like the happy ending!

nice ending. enjoyable reading and worthy of five stars for excellent wording in how a father-daughter love, marriage and family life can work. Perhaps now that our 'brilliant' members of the supreme court has determined same sex marriage is the law of the land - why not incest?

I thought this was very well done, but if I may provide some meant-to-be-constructive criticism? 1. I would have enjoyed more "pillow talk" between the characters (perhaps see VanillaExtract's latest "Deserving Daddy") and 2. The story built up to the first night in Paris, and that's okay, but after that it wound up and ended a bit too quickly. I would have liked more juicy (but loving) sex as, say, they experimented with anal, etc.

You just made me a member of the site, due to the way you brought your story forth. I personally wished I could have given you a 20 star rating, but since it only goes as far as five stars.. I'll owe you the other 15 stars.

SORRY YOU FELT THE NEED TO ASK FOR A 5...... YES, THE 5 I GAVE YOU, THE STORY WAS THAT GOOD, YOURS IS THE ONLY 5 OUT OF THE 20 OR 25 THAT I HAVE READ ON THIS SITE....... GREAT JOB, PLEASE MORE ;)

Loved it! We should have more stories like this. Ones that actually are stories and not just a random bunch of activities!!!

A very exquisite story to say the least. It's amazing and I hope you make more like this!!

This is such an amazing story with an excellently written plot and storyline. It's simply amazing, and honestly the best fanfic I've ever read!

Amazing story

People will find racist, ethic, life style gripes in anything and everything that tweeks their bigoted minds. I thought the story was well presented, well written and something many dads would like their daughters to read. For the nay sayers - get over it life is tough far beyond your interpretations of racial bigotry

It was kind of racist guys. I pressed 5 stars by mistake, I was going to give you 3/4. It was too long winded, you should have just gone straight to the sex.

WHAT A DOWNER. I PRESSED 5 STARS BY MISTAKE AND CAN''T SEEM TO GET IT BACK. ALL I WANTED TO GIVE YOU IS 2 STARS. THE RACIST HATE CRAP WILL KILL YOUR WRITING APPEAL EVERY TIME. I LIKED THE STOREY BUT AFTER YOUR STUPID RACIST OUTBURST, I JUST FELT TO SAD FOR YOU. I WONT READ YOUR STUFF AGAIN

I think It wasn't racism. If she said "all of them rape and hate" then yes but other than that she said that those specific uncicumsized Arabs raped her. In a dream which btw...she didnt even dream

Would have been great without all the ignorant racist shit. Detracted from the story. There are Christian Arabs and ones with blond hair and they ARE circumcised.... As if being uncircumcised means you're savage or something. Totally unnecessary.

It was good. Definitely the type of story hat you'd find on here

Would've enjoyed it if she wasn't such a fucking racist. Jesus, going on and on how Arabs hate Americans cause they're free and Christian? The duck out of here with that shit

Tonight, as often happens, when I press on the stars, they do not respond, so I can not tell the world this is a five star reading experience for me. I encourage you to to bring this up w Literotica.

Well crafted.....hot ....i read it slowly to enjoy it all

I don't normally comment but wow...I personally don't know my dad which makes it weird to like reading this stuff, but I do have a dad role model and just imagining him throughout this story which is amazingly written by the way was really amazing. You should keep writing I really enjoyed reading this.

Outstanding. I am an older guy with ED issues, even with meds. I LOVE daring stories with a good build-up, the best way for me to get off!

I love that you can develop an exciting story line in just a few chapters! Excellent story teller! Thank you for all those erotic moments with just enough teasing and sex to keep me flipping pages and wondering how you could make the story better...for me it's a perfect mix of storyline and sex...loved it, keep them cumming!

I had a step daughter that wanted me to make love to her and I wanted to but because of time and pressures, I refrained from doing so. I have always regretted not making love to her. I envy your dad!!!! Thank you, hon. My email for a response if you please is, sgte51948@yahoo.com.

He found, and almost rejected, the one woman in the world who would always love him without condition. Family Love should never be discounted, it is very real. And it is just as real today as for these many thousands of years. Poor man. Her slow seduction of him gave him little choice in the matter. The story being written from the POV of twelve years later is really good. Long enough for them to have made many memories, but not too long to be able to recall them clearly. It seems that night when his final barrier came down he committed himself wholeheartedly and never looked back. He's lucky. Being her father and Doctor, he knows EVERTHING there is to know about his wife. For most husbands, at least the first 18yrs of his wife's life is pretty much a mystery to him except for what she decides to tell him. A good place for both of them. I don't think you need to add anytihing to this. Everything is here.

Family, love and such is always strange but even in those times, better than ever.

the lucky dad got such a sweet daughter..

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I'm so horny! This made me so wet! :D

good...... it had awaken both love and lust....!!!!!!!!!