All Comments on '"Daddy?" I Whispered'

It's not very realistic.

I love this story. You are obviously talented. Don't know how long you've been writing, but you have certainly (obviously) found your niche. Don't worry obout those who are offended about your use Arabs. Its obvious that you simply had to use someone of a different culture adn religion that we don't totally understand. Just as easily you could have used a group of sweaty, drunken Marines. It is simply a tool to advance the story line. In here she never stops calling him Daddy even years into their marriage which is so beautiful and hot. Fantastic.

I loved the way the story unfolded and the freedom they shared to be naked with each other and then the trip to Paris and finally fucking together was so beautiful.....and three kids to add to the nest....just brilliant - vice is nice but incest is best......go for it....you will never regret it....

It was totally awesome I to am in love with your daughter / wife me and my daughter have read it numerous times thanks

What is wrong with Arabs? why do you describe them with bad language?

The Arabs wash them selves five time a day, because they are Muslims.

You are hating Arabs because you are racism!

The Arabs practice the Circumcision, you need some education about peoples.

Please be a fair and equitable!

I just love the whole thing. I jerked to it every second I could. best story I read in years.

Great story. Love the hard sex!!

The sex scenes were very vivid and impressive, which makes me think the author reads a lot of erotic literature. While the dialogue was somewhat cliche, but doable. Some of the details made me question whether the story wasn't all fiction. When I got to the end where there is a mention of 3 daughters the fantasy is shattered in my view. All I think about at that point is how these girls are most likely underdeveloped or mutated in some way. I mean, that is why even royalty stopped the inbreeding. I don't see the point in ending the story that way... But I must admit it was hot, and that was what I was looking for so it served its purpose.

Truth be said... I was going to stop reading this after a few paragraphs, no being my cup of tea, so to speak. But then I thought while reading, lets see how this plays out and I am glad I did!

Now the question is... some truth to this, *Smiles*

the last to comment on this story it is spelled tear not teir but great story

Too good to be true... but I had tiers when she read the note that came with her pearls, and I came with them that first night in Paris!

Cute story! well told and well read! :)

Never gotten this wet just reading something. ;)

Was really thrown off at the end. When you said Steff was now thirty and Dad is almost fifty! Unless he is doogie houser and finished med school at 18, the math does not add up. By the time he was done with med school and in a practice he would be a minimum 28. If Steff is 30 then Dad needs to be almost 60 (not almost 50)! You did such a good and erotic effort with the story I wish you took a little more time to get the timeline correct! For me it takes away From the story! But still gave it a 5!

My pussy has literally been dripping everywhere and squirting I need a good fucking pronto

The fact that I read all of this says it all. I couldnt stop and I'm throbbing! It's times like this when I wish I wasn't in a long distance relationship.

My pussy is soaking wet I need to be fucked

I had to cum twice while I read this

This story reminds me of my stepdaughter who I've cum in before!!

I loved this because not only was it hot primal sex it went to a happy ending ^.^

this was a great read i normally don't read erotic stories but dang this was incredibly well written

THIS IS ABSOLUTELY HOT STUFF!!! Really good. Keep up the good work.

BY FAR THE HOTTEST AND SEXIEST EROTIC STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!!

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Just fucking erotic

For all of us who have actually had this fantasy, it was an erotic tale.

Love for you to continue the saga perhaps after shes married!

IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT---> FUCK OFF

Keep your racism and your elitist circumcision views to yourself, please.

It is surprising how good this story is, amid all the other father-daughter stories on this site. The reason is simple. Told from the daughter's point-of-view, it emphasizes the romance of the relationship.The story could have been over-the-top, and therefore not believable. Scouries, as a writer, knows when to minimize the descriprions, thereby keeping it believable at all times.

I loved this story--the pacing, the amount of erotic content balanced with exposition, and the tension between the two characters.

However, a couple of things stopped me from giving it a solid five. One being my own issue--I loved the story but didn't like that they had kids together (again, my own personal boundaries/issues).

Putting that aside, the description at the beginning of her dream with the "dirty Arabs" and "weren't circumcised" just struck me as unnecessarily racist and penis-shaming. It took away from what was otherwise a wonderful story.

This is an amazing story, except the whole "sweaty, disgusting Arabs who are jealous of our blond hair and good looks" part xD I was just like wtf is that about?! Lol. Great story nonetheless.

This story has a common basis, but you always seem to do it better. Keep on writing, and I'll keep on reading them.

I really enjoyed your story and do hope it will lead to him enjpying the children he has now fathered with her. Very nicely done. More please. Thanks. dp

IM SO GLAD THERE WAS NO SUCKING ON ASSHOLES , BUT ON SUCH A FINE YOUNG TEENAGE BEAUTY THERE SHOULD HAVE BEEN A LOT MORE EATING OF THE PUSSY. IT WAS A GREAT STORY ANYWAY DON SELF

yeah those arabs stinks....

That was so random and strange...and unnecessary... lol...

How come racism had to be a part of the story?

Suddenly Steff is complaining about Arabs.

WTF?

wow this is incredible to be able to put such a sexual fantasy such as this one is just truly amazing i am so incredibly horny right now!

To me this story seems so true... To my knowledge, love between father - daughter or mother - son is much more common than people think.

This is actually one of the best stories I have ever read. There is only one story that is better and that is the one that is in my head that I could never get in writing. It would not be that different from this one.

Thanks again.

Loved it!!

A wonderful, sexy story! Redeemed, of course, by having the daughter be the agressor. BUT, the excellence of the story was a little tarnished by grammatical and spelling errors which, for me, were distracting. Errors stop the flow of the tale.

I thought the happy ending was very nice. All relationships that don't stick to 'the rules' don't turn out badly. Steffie is a strong, focused woman who carried through. Great!

Wow that soaked my pussy. I came three times. Mmm

this is perfect it gives me drems of when my sexy dughter turns eighteen hope we hve the gret reltionship you both do keep up the writing bob

Thanks for sharing. It was hot, steamy, without being vulgar. Not to endorse such behavior but the writing/storytelling is excellent. It made a repellant reality into a hot fantasy.

Thanks again.

This story made me cum twice. Fucking sexy. Wish my dad would do that. I have such a throbbing pussy now

as I read this delightful tale whilst sipping my morning tea on the terrace. Thank you for a perky start to my day!

OMG I loved it...need more good stories

This is so so hot...i love it...kissses to Daddy....

I loved it! I want more.

Absolutly loved it.

Love it

i stuffed up clicked wrong star , no it was a good read nicely ended

Although i am not into incest what a hot story. I love how it ends you get to see a happy ending with two people who love each other.

x Winkwinkjojo x

To those people that have to pop in and leave a comment about you being offended by racism, screw off. If you don't like it leave. Don't stop and comment, whining about your displeasure, just back up your browser and move on. Stop being attention whores and grow a set. Name's Jerry btw. Pussies.

it's porn, ya pc doodles. and pretty good at that. i suppose it would have been ok had the bad guys been blue eyed blond haired germans. guess somebody would have staged a drive-by had they been black. how about some tolerance for the artist? i would like to see a novel, or at least a novella sprout out of it. maybe next time?

Good buildup, sexy throughout and excellent finish!

Fantastic story, thank you

the arab comment WAS racist and the whole 'jealous of our freedom' bs was really fking not on. Also, its racist because of stereotypical comments of beard etc It completely stopped me working my clit like wtf dude at least offer a fking apology at the start or a warning so i wouldnt have wasted my time and got completely turned off.

I'd find this story really hot if it weren't for the racism...totally turned me off. Not cool.

Oooh how I wish I was the girl in the story.As I read it all I can think about is how much I want to be with my uncle.Each day I plan to get him,I have a Ipod which I put some porn videos and pics on just to show.So he get turn on and want to fuck me again as he used when I was a small child.He feel I don't remember.

good storyline that led up to the ending. Very hot and well-written. Keep writing more stories!

Right up front I want to briefly made a comment that several minutes ago never entered my mind, consciously nor unconsciously! RACISM? Just exactly what is it? As long as it's NOT a white person, a caucasian, that makes or utters any comment, sordid, nasty, biased, remarks of any type or persuasion, that person and their comments are overlooked and ignored and are never considered racist. IT IS ONLY when a white, caucasian makes an exact same comment, exact same wording, does it becoma a racist remark. PEOPLE!!! Get over it? it is only racist IN THE EYES OF THE BEHOLDER!!!!! The object, the target of the spewer, the projector of the words or remarks are not in most cases the reacist.

The author/writer of this story is to be commended, applauded, and congratulated to the utmost degree for his/her penmanship and knowledge and love and compassion for compiling this EPIC--though not in length but words--saga of pure, innocent, compassionate and everlasting love and devotion. There are almost 200,000 words in Webster's (1976 version) Dictionary, and none of them could have better been selected nor used to build this story any better than the words chosen by this author. It is a grandslam, perfectly pitched shutout baseball World Series game winning the Championship ten to zero with a world television audience of ten billion, an over capacity-filled stadium played in their home park. It just fantfuckingtastically doesn't get any more PERFECT than that!!!!!

Lastly, being a purist and perfectionist, the ratings I offer have to be deserved, not passed out to be nice, but in my opinion, objectively. Rarely, very rarely do I give the top rating for an incest story unless, after the consummation of the incestual love, the female character is impregnated, bred, made with child, blessed with procreation, propagation, or some similiar connotation. There are a few instances, where the female is unable to conceive--age, disability, or physically, or medically--and in that case the story must be worthy of excellent and almost perfect in every aspect, then I will honor the story (and author) their just reward. This story not only got my rare and blessed "5 Star" rating, but congratulations beyond my wildest imagination for a story so well conceived, written and constructed. JOB WELL DONE!! In fact, this story is so good and so real, it is a shame it is not real, non-fiction!

As for racism--America is the least raceist country in the world. But then it also had the best healthcare in the world until power hungrey socialists got control of the democratic party and use both for achieving more power and control over fools that listen to them spin-lie about everything!

I truly enjoyed reading this story and I'm glad you and your daddy have children together and are happily married. What a great love story. Wish it was me.

very well written. you have a talent.

Absolutely a wonderful love story.

It seems there is more and more validation to the studies of family love.

Story was easy to read and a becoming love story. Enjoyed reading it.

Hey bigot? You should get a 0 score to match your mentality. The 'hated it!' score of 1 will just have to be a reflection for you and have to do. How bout you and that RCummings creature die alone and in pain.?)..just kidding..

U have done an incredible job by writing this story.I'm reading this story for the 5th time.The last paragraphs, particularly "Present-2006", have once again brought tears to my eyes.I can't believe an erotic story moved me.Pls try to come up with a book.Like about Stephanie's childhood, how she started k getting attracted to her dad & most importantly about their life after marriage.That would be delightful to read u know.If books like Fifty Shades Of Grey can be best-sellers, so can a book based on your story.If possible pls be kind enough to come up with a second part.That would be awesome. :-)

Every think of writing storiesand publishing them on the side? Make a bit extra money with stories like this.. id buy if this one was in a book :)

Absolutely loved it! I rubbed my pussy through more than half the story and lost count of how many times I came.. Please continue writing more like this... Voted 5 out of 5 stars... Still dripping wet....

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I loved this story and your writing style. Im going to read your other entries now and i will vote on all of them, and if they are as good as this was you will be recieving more 5stars!

This story was truly amazing. I really loved it's substance. Awesome

You're stories ... all of them.... It's as though you write what's going through my head. They're so well written...and enthrauling. So real... so filled with Love and Lust. Always with just the right amount of detail. Please continue to write. I will always continue to read.

The way you put the emotions into a story makes it worth reading a 1000 times, in fact I've read this one about 50 times and every time it feels anew. You are the best author I've read yet on the whole of the internet. Thanks for writing such masterpieces.

Well written! You could feel the passion you created between father and daughter,

Best orgasm ever. But in some parts of the story it was a little boring (in the beginning)

Loved the story, it was well written although I did have to tolerate the racism at the beginning (try to exclude that from your other stories) nevertheless it was still hot.

Brought me to waves of anticipation.

Still one of my favourites. As erotica I'm not expecting Charlotte Bronte styled writing but the description of the love between Stephanie and her dad was beautiful. Slightly unrealistic, however, that's what makes the fantasy. Also like many other people said the racism was what killed it a bit. Be careful with what you write in the future because you could be offending someone who might even like your writing until they saw that.

Overt racism and pretty mediocre writing.

So hot, very well written, I'm so wet.

One of the best I've read yet!!

What you call sperm (which is short for spermatozoa) constitutes some five percent of semen and is produced in the testicles then carried into the seminal fluid from the prostate gland at ejaculation. Alternatives are spunk,love juice or anything else except sperm. Many Americans make this mistake.(I am English.)

A different point is why in such stories every physical attribute is apparently perfect,whether in appearance or performance.

However,I greatly enjoyed your tale. Thank you.

Yrs, Billydave. (By mistake I have made this public instead of private. Thus the author will probably not read it,for I am too weary to re-write it. )

Very well-written. But what's the deal with the nightmare about 'foreigners' raping a white woman because 'she's blond(e) and good-looking' and so they're jealous of her. Could you get a little more conceited? Are you a south American? In any case, you Americans are know to be a bunch of idiotic bigots. No brains, only judgements. Dint mean to me that demeaning, but just so that you get to see a reflection of the racist picture that you painted.

I have read many father & daughter incest stories and I liked this the best. Somehow or some way I am very attracted to these stories. Not sure, never had any incest or was there in the family. For all the horror stories of incest and abuse I enjoy the love story and actually know three women who stay involved with their daddy's. All of them had children by them or their brothers, kept the babies, move away from "home" and are living like any married couple. I think this is more the reality. I certainly hope so.

Brilliant prose.

Bigotted hack writing!

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WITH RED HEAD LIPS

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The racism part was a real turn off that I stopped reading.

It was very hard to find the characters attractive after that.

THE STORY IS WORTH 5 BUT THE ENGLISH ONLY 1

Jim, this is the 2nd time I've read this story, and it's just as good as the first time over a year ago!

BTW, where have you been, buddy? You haven't posted anything new here since February! I can't wait to read what you've got planned for us next!

My daughter and I loved it keep writing.

Your story gave credence to my daughter and me in our relationship which is in our fourth year. Thank you

Got me so wet and turned on! Best story yet!(;

Absolutly amazing, i fantasize about my daughter, and this story sort of give me hope that one day she will truely be daddys little girl

well written and developed. i very good read. and you gave us a good ending. thanks

Thank you! It was an incredible read!

Holy cow. 5 stars for me. It was so hot and sexy. Thank you.

This is, and has always been, my most favorite story.

It was amazing. The best I've ever read. So much detail and depth in this type of story. You earned the five stars from me.