All Comments on 'Daddy Loves Alana'

Please please please tell me there's going to be a second part to this story...it's very good.

Five stars

If this is a 5 star story then you are dumber than the dimwit daughter. This turd needs a double flush cuz it's a huge pile of shitty shit

Are bleeding after reading this shit. For fucks sake please stop!

Am Anfang fand ich die Geschichte etwas langweilig, aber das änderte sich im Verlauf total. Ich freue mich auf eine Fortsetzung.

English comment:

This time, it is not so easy, to translate. "08/15" is a special German term. It means very common, nothing special. It derives from a machine gun, "type '8' from the year 1915": It was produced all over the time of the " Worldwar I". So, looking from that point of view,

I like your story very much.

Father and doughter find together. That is awesome enough!

I felt that the story could have used a bit of a build up, but it wasn't bad. I'd read any additions you have to this story. I would just suggest that you take your time to build up to the bigger moments.

If you think you can do a better story then do so, otherwise shut up. This was a great story hon never mind the so called expert who probably can't even write a paragraph.

Woah! Don't get ahead of yourself there daddy! I just wanted to lose my cherry with you and get some experience before I head off to college. Gotta learn how to seduce and sex those professors! You should still divorce mom. Either that or turn her over your lap and spank some r.e.s.p.e.c.t. Into her ass!! Bout time you wore the pants around here, dontcha think?

A nice little story let down by the rather childish dialogue used by the father, For example: "Daddy wants to mount you". He's talking to an adult not a baby.