All Comments on 'Daddy Loves Me Ch. 01'

I can't wait to read more !

this story has lots of delightful potential :-)

As a member of the Daddy/lil girl world (for some 6 or 7 years, and currently starting a relationship with a new lil girl) it is a delight to see it written about from a girl's point of view.

My only constructive comment . . leave out the parts that are written from her Daddy's point of view . . this should be a story from just her point of view :-)

I love how you are building this story. Please keep going with it. I like were you are heading. Just don't rush through it. That will kill your story in a heart beat.

Definitely keep writing. This is super hot!

Wow I can feel the chemistry and foreshadow of a very hot solid story. I like how you're explaining it right from the beginning, with the initial spark. So many erotic fiction stories are wham-bams, with a two-sentence intro then to the fucking. But this has substance. PLEASE continue sooooon :) I'm a 'little girl' myself and can't wait to read more!!!! I'm book marking this to check back often :) 100% rating!

I'm so bummed there isn't more to this story! I really hope you continue it.

works for me GO ON THEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great beginning, I enjoy the two person view, do continue

Pleeeeeeeease finish this!

... right? 😉

Either way, great little story!