by Daddyneedsbois
I love your story. A skilful written gay d/s just the way I like it. Nice plot, good word choice.
I can hardly wait for more stories of yours!
delicious... i want to be your girl too xxxx prettyboytoy
Oh god I love you so much! I NEED to be your girl! I love it how you use me and fuck me to your heart's content, and the fact that you love me and care for me makes it all even better !
Super freaking hot story, hun. :) I absolutely adore your second-person narrative style.
Sir, i would wear a collar for you just after reading your stories! Good God how you would make me do all the things i'm too afraid to do myself....
i have been reading literotica for years. This is the first time ones writing has driven me to comment. I am hard as a rock imaging being your girl in this rape fantasy and rape play has never been my thing.