by CaFem45
I really really loved it and can't wait for what happens next. You can't leave it at that, there's a lot to come yet. Please finish chapter 2 as soon as possible. Thank you.
This story just left me exited and wanting more. Well written and striking a deep chord.
I beat him to the draw , I came before he did .Great story and looking forward to parts 2 and 3 and more as she goes on business trips with Daddy .
Irresistible combination of Film Noir style heroine in 6in heels with her Daddy. Add superb writing and serve to an adoring public. I only hope there is more planned. Cheers. UK CYNIC
Loved the slow and precise buildup, to what was an explosive finale. Can't wait for Chapter 2.
Well started of story line, just enough to keep me coming back for each instalment without giving it all away.
Look forward to chapter 2.......