All Comments on 'Daddy's Lil Cheerleader'

A potentially good story but...you need to get some help editing your material. You went from one tense to another and, as a result, you ended up ruining your submission. It got too disconcerting and ruined what looked to be a promising story. Why don't you clean it up and resubmit it....???e

I liked the story and it definitely got me off but all of the grammatical mistakes were very distracting.

Thought is was great, wish it could have been longer. Loved the ass to mouth!

Loved your descriptions maybe add photos that would be awesome

Despite the lack there of my pussy still got really wet reading this!

5'7, 105lbs, and with 34C boobs? Uh, maybe some guys frind that hot, but your anorexic daughter with fake tits needs help.

will ther be eney more of daddy's lil cheerlader maby with a black girl???

Hot and dirty... i love it

Loved it! definitely got me wet.

OH Yeaa that sounds amazing i wish i can fuck your daughter too

excellent story hot as hell. got a hard early on into it. brought back memories of the years of fucking my sister. we lived together for two years and people thought we were man and wife. while our sex life was great it got much better once we both got into bi sexual experiences with her eating pussy and me blowing guys and giving them my ass. once the word got out that we were open to all forms of sex our sex lives improved. Gangbangs on both of us became the norm and still is. both have become sluts.

Umm.. not everyone likes chunky girls. A lot of people do like slim and fit girls that are 5'7 and 105lbs. Sounds perfectly fit to me.

Young, slim, and tight.... very hott!

Fucking perfect story. Great action and just the right amount of kink. This is officially the best story I've read on this site. Bravo.

this made me blow a massive load all over the bedroom

Pity the hung son didn't cum on the dad's face too. Hopefully next time the dad and son can stop being pussies, and have a proper bi threesome.