All Comments on 'Daddy's Little Disappointment'

keep it up it has the start of a good series here

usa

Sorry, as much as I like these types of stories, this one needs a lot of work. There is no flow to the storyline, it is more like a series of short glimpses, like snapshots from a camera. There were a lot of little typos and misspellings that did not help either. The concept was good, but you should have developed the interplay between the sisters more, as that was the main thrust of the story. Rather than introducing a fourth character.

JimDinMN

as another responder said not very well done.

Would have liked the spankings more symbolic and less violent also.

could have described the panties and made it sound a little more real but over all good story

Your math is a little off. If he married in 1985 and the first daughter was born in 1990( five years later) and the second in 1992. They would be 15 and 13 now, not college age.

Thanks or pointing out the error in the birthdays which I hope doesn't detract from the story. It should be evident from the context however that the girls' ages are 20 & 18 respectively.

Mark

enjoyed the story please keep them coming. love too read a sequel.

Now a Follow-Up with Daddy and Both Daughters would be Most Excellent.

"You hear that?" enquired Bob into the phone. "Did you hear me spank my filthy little whore of a daughter?"

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