All Comments on 'Daddy's Little Princess'

by Lady Malachite

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jackofthedawnjackofthedawnover 16 years ago
Enjoyed it

This story is probably mis-categorized under romance. I would have put it in the humor category. Anyway, I found it both amusing and hot.

kayne0kayne0over 16 years ago
Loved it

Some of your best work yet. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
what a hottie

well written and veryvery hot

BrianRBrianRover 16 years ago
Brilliantly written

This is, without doubt, your best work yet. It has everything a reader could wish for. It's sensitive, sensuous, amusing, and highly "arousing". Who could possibly ask for more?

Thankyou,

Brian. (UK)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Very amusing

Had me on my toes until the end, wondering what devilish thing she would think up next!

Great work!

Maharat

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
WOW!!!

THIS WAS A TERRIFIC STORY. I LOVED IT AND WAS WAITING TO SEE WHAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN. UNTIL I GOT TO THE END. WHERE IS THE REST OF THE STORY????????

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
:)

Seriously hot. sizzling almost :) Cheers Yoron.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
awesome awesod

omg you need to write a sequel i loved it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
need another chapter

definitely need another chapter. continue with the date with exquisite details about the hot sex after or just making out.....looking forward to it!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
SO coolio

More!¬

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Garbage

Bring on the trash truck.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
First prize.

......in the bad writing contest

Rarely have I encountered such a load of old bollocks!

ThelvynerThelvynerabout 7 years ago
Characters

Sorry couldn't even start to like the boss or Anyone in his family. Found this story to be mostly about using and manipulation. There was no romance in this story. I do not believe she loves him at all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Ho hum.

Utter bollocks.

OvercriticalOvercriticalabout 1 month ago

I can't believe I made my way through the whole thing even if i mostly skimmed it. It wasn't worth the time, that's for sure. And I won't spend any time on the comment. 2*

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