by Grayeyedsub2
The story should have described her being fucked more and the actual taking of her body should be described more. Story was hot but to short.
I like this story. It is simple and raw. None of the 2 or 3 pages of romantic filler that one tends to skip through anyway. And it is such a turn on how he "growls." The growling is so masculine and rough and yet has a softness too, indicating how much he wants her and needs her in order to be fulfilled. And then my favorites are always a daddy and daughter story. Mmmmmm, especially a daddy sucking the milk from his daughters tits.
Thank you...I enjoyed your writing. Milk is such fun!
More please.
Stu
A well crafted scene, evocative and erotic. Good descriptive writing and rendering of the sex scene. Short but very sweet.