All Comments on 'Daddy's Perfect Chance Ch. 02'

I loved it, but there are two small problems. #1 in the middle of the threeway you called the dad Micheal and the son Danny but you had called the son Micheal and the dad Danny before and after that making it juct a little bit confusing. #2 it was to short. It needs more chapters.

I love how you brought the brother in. Hope you continue the tale! *kisses* ~CG~

The brother did fit in great! Continue your writings!

please continue this story

wow,more please.little T has all the male she can handle.thanks.

I loved this story...I hope you continue to write more chapters for it!

O please write more I LOVED this series please don't stop keep writing more!!!:):)

This was nice, but as all stories go it seems there were way too many unreal orgasms lol I'm pretty sure she'd be hurting after number four.

The Author of this needs to proof read since there is a few segments where the father (Danny) and the brother (Michael) are switched as if the author forgot which character they named which. There are a few other grammatical errors. Please proof read or have someone else proof read before publication. Thank you.

Write more!! T should end up pregnant from her brother!

T should totally get pregnant it would be totally awesome

I am addicted! Wow, this story keeps getting better. More!!!!!!! You are a very good writter.

I loved this story so much, that I would LOVE to read a part 3!!! Getting pregnant and both of them taking care and loving her as they have in this Ch.

Please write a Ch. 3...

i think you should let daddy and brother have their moment

I was good until the brother was brought into the equation, but the daddy daughter sex was good. . .I couldn't finish it after the brother for some strange reason that grosses me out. . .Maybe b/c I have a brother but not a father. . . so it doesn't have the same hold for me if you know what I mean???

I love both Ch.'s, but have you thought about writing it as if it happened the way her Dad and Brother had originality planned for it to be???

That could also make a great story...

I wish I had that life

Ok I’m confused is Danny the father or brother cause it said Danny was pounding her and Michael was licking her clit but then it said that Michael was pounding her and Danny was licking her clit.

So HOT! Please write more. She needs to be DP'd before she goes on birth control and Michael gets to fuck her. I truly thought is was going to happen when daddy started getting under her but he only fingered her to help her relax. Having daddy's cock in her pussy while her brother's in he ass would have made her totally relaxed.

So nice and hot. Maybe a sequel?