All Comments on 'Daddy's Sin'

Best read in months.dam that was a filly.keep writing babes.don.t stop.full meal deal 5

You are finally written a story that had a beginning, a middle, and a superlative ending. It was well thought out, and executed. I will admit that this story excited me, which very few of the stories on this site do.

Okay but Josh...

I enjoyed this story very much. Wish you had continued. I found it after reading your "How to write an orgasm" which was a big help Thanks!

OH MY GAWD!!! that was so horny sexy hot...unlikely but oh soooooo hot!!!

I love my daughter and was in a similar spot, but did not go that far. If it had I don't think that I could have stopped. She is a very beautiful woman and this story hit home. I can only hope that she reads this, thank you and keep writing.

i hope you write more

Learn to write.

Fingered myself through the whole thing. Amazing

She was probably awake the whole time. I would have been. I'm stacy18_bi@hotmail.com. Hit me up

Love this story..

Great work :)

When I finished your sweet tale I did not know whether to hyperventilate or to hypoventilate. Life was saved as they tended to even each other out.

ive wanted my sexy stepdad to do this to me after ive teased him silly. im 22, hes 44...and fuckin hot...i want him to lose control and take me, thinking its his idea to fuck me, but really its mine to seduce him...im stacy18_bi@hotmail.com

of being caught fucking your daughters face by your wife and you have the plot of an excellent story. Very well written, good development of the story and great ending. Kept me reading right to the end. Even left me wanting more.

However, I must mention he shuddered not shuttered. Same for her rather than shatter. Bit not a big deal. Thanks for posting.

I love sleep sex and incest stories so this one was doubly good. I like how they didn't fuck, making it more realistic and hopefully setting up a follow up chapter. good work!

Love it, very nice! You are sure making it hard to get up and walk now!

Daaaaammmmnnnnnnnnnn girl! Who knew you had this in you? *wink*

scorching hawt, intensely seductive, please say there's a part 2- lets say in an hour ? * big puppy eyes pleading* -mmmmm

Super good job! I could feel the mixed emotions your words described---But found myself aroused by them as well!

Wonderful job!

or was she faking being asleep?

no, I don't think it's me at all

This is not my favourite genre - I am not a fan of incest. However, damn was this story hot! Really really hot. It was easy to ignore the 'incest' part and get carried away with the narrative; I couldn't stop reading. I think I'll have to read the rest your stories.

I have now reached the end and started breathing again.

after reading this story I went to your bio and read others

I love reading porn written by women

thanx