All Comments on 'Dad's Loving Step Daughter Ch. 02'

This was just as bad as the last one. Between more bad grammar and spelling, I won't be reading any more of your stories. BTW, SWEET is what candy tastes like; SWEAT is perspiration!! You did it in both episodes. Smh

You SO need an editor.

You need an editor, this story was difficult to read.

for the next one <3