All Comments on 'Dad's The Man Ch. 05'

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elspethsheynaelspethsheynaalmost 13 years ago

I loved it. This is so hot and erotic and I find it so hard to wait for more. The anticipation is killing me. I can't wait to see what happens with kat and her dad. Your characters are well written and overall it's a great read. Keep 'em coming

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Good work

This story is getting better and better. The writer is gifted and crafted a coherent plot with fascinating characters and fluent dialogues. Thanks, top score

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Excellently...

..wonderful!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Poor gina

From the way the story is going, it looks like she might end up with a broken heart. She's my fav character in this story. I hope she has a happy ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

finally dad/daughter stuff it seemed like only girl/girl stuff

WarfolomeiWarfolomeiover 12 years ago
Can't..

.. stop reading

pusylvr69pusylvr69about 12 years ago
INCREDIBLY HOT!!!

I was going to wait until I finished this series to leave a comment, but I have to leave one after that chapter. I enjoyed the build up of the characters and the understanding of what each of them are going through. Kat is HOT! Can't wait to read the next chapter...keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Well here we are on chapter five, and I only see one more chapter in the sadbar, I mea°-qn sidebar, heh. Either way that seems sadly unpleasant, like I'll see a really old file date and come to the realization that the story will never sea an ending (outside of my imagination).

The story is still great, btw;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Bisexual?

Maybe Kathleen is and she just doesn't know it yet. Excellent chap btw. 5* -d

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a9 months ago

I thoroughly enjoy watching the emotional, mental and psychological growth of Kathleen. I am waiting for her to take control of the situation. Her sense of self, ego and id have not developed to their full potential. I like the fact that she has no self-loathing, self-recrimination, self-doubt, shame or guilt. She has her boundaries and does not adjust them to satisfy others. However, she has not developed the confidence to get what se wants or most desires. 5 star series.

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