by ladyofthemasque
You are developing this as a great love story. I also like the leader ship partnership they are developing. Please keep these lovely coming A.S.A.P.
thank you for taking the time to make this chapter so deliciously exciting and suspenseful. i can't wait for more. perhaps the conclusion will come soon based on what has happened so far?
PLEASE, more, hurry - dont make us wait as long as we had to for this one, please!!!!!
Finally, finally. Worth the wait, etc. etc., already waiting for the next one!
AND BY GOD, IT WAS WORTH IT. Great chapter, please dont make me wait so long again, but a know a good story takes time, and like a beaten dog i'll patiently wait for the next chapter
about time, now how about another chapter really soon. I can't wait for what ever happens next.
Patience is a virtue. I know, I know, this is Literotica, where virtue is meant to be despoiled lasciviously. But I'm giving up my editor's position on the newsletter I produce in just two more issues (one more month), and then I'll have a heck of a lot more time to concentrate on these sort of things. I'll also be working up an original e-novel of romantica (romance & erotica) to see if I can get it published. So patience is worth applying, yes?
Okay, okay! That's not good enough for you. Fine. I'll get to work...next week. ;-D ~Lotm (Ladyofthemasque)
I had no idea that erotica could be so well written. Well, I take that back. The skill level of ladyofthemasque is reminescent of Anais Nin. Both weave sex and life into enchanting stories.
I look forward to reading more of the Sunny and Daemon series. I join many fans who wait with bated breath for the next installment. I know it will be intriguing.
Ladyofthemasque, you are truly talented. Please keep us informed of your new projects. I wish you great critical and commercial success.
Thanks for providing such well-writen, entertaining, interesting erotica. Like everyone else, I am anxiously awaiting your next installment.
Since I first started reading your stores I've been hooked. Excellent storytelling and a very well thought out original plot. Please keep up the most excellent work! I check just about every two days to see if you've updated. ^_^ LOVE IT!
Please continue writing more about daemon and Sunny.. I'm absolutely hooked.Do you possibly think you could write them faster?
Aww... no Familial Whatnot Ball? I only hope we'll got to it in the next chapter, because the tension with the Astorrans and the pirates is getting crazy.
It's been so long since the last installment; I assume chapter 8 will soon be forthcoming? With the ball, and the clothing, and the denouement of sorts (I'm sure there'll be intrigue even after D&S announce their status).
I'd also like to say that the swear words are a nice touch- I get the impression Sunny enjoys swearing, but isn't too vulgar.
*sigh* If only you were published... I could be happy (or at least well entertained).
-Kathryn
I have enjoyed the build of tension in the story. It is evident by the commentary listed in the public comment. I am like everyone else, I am excited by the promise of another chapter.
Please finish the story. I've been sooooooo patient. It's wonderfully written and I can't wait for the ending.
I think I'm suffering from withdrawal symptoms. I need to read the rest of the story.
OH I HAVE WAITED SO LONG FOR THIS! And I'm damn glad i did! Great work as always. I'm trying to be patient but this is torture! As always I loved it keep it up!
-Sam
I have been reading the whole of this story and can't tell you how much I enjoy it. For it's story quality and it's turn ons as well, but I must say the thing that got me the most in this one was the Rainbow Prayer. Awefully cute! The humor of it all is phenomenal!!
What genius!! I love that line "what do you get when you mix rain and sunshine, but a rainbow?" I love this story and especially this chapter! I love the names of the different sexual "religious" acts and how these ones flowed together seamlessly! What wonderful work! Keep it up!
i just have to say that the term "rainbow prayer" is just hilarious...very nicely done :)
i LOVE this story! the vividness of the descriptions of the palace, the saeda, etc..it brings to ind the court amadallah in star wars...
i love the romance of it and of course the sex scenes are "stimulatingly" hot hehe...
wonder of you're now published and under what name since you have stopped writing...