All Comments on 'Daemon Days Ch. 01'

Very interesting. I hope to read the next installment soon.

this was hot...can't wait to read more.....please!

Working on the next one - will keep you posted

This story has real potential the only thing is that it is really rather dryly written. Try bring more feeling into your writing, more description, such as the feeling of the rock under her skin or the way the demon's spine would have to bend in order for him to lick her clit while fucking her. One other thing, remember to poof read as many times as you can stand, you have some missing words and also you spelled demon incorrectly. You have a great start here and I would love to see more as you progress this is an incredibility imaginative story.

I didn't recall the name of the victim but she had one hell of sex session with this horned beast. The story was bold and creative and it seemed to work

Good story and actually Daemon is the correct usage it's just closer to the Latin "daimon" which means god, deity, or demon. Also given the time period that this story is clearly set in using a more ancient form of the word fits quite nicely.

damn just damn that was so hot