All Comments on 'Damien Night Ch. 03'

by AutumnRayven

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
no patience

I so terribly wish that you would post more of this story quickly, unfortunatly I have no patience.............. great job.............

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
eh..

While I do like the story, I can't help but wonder if she is going to give in to him or just vanquish him... Hopefully on the next chapter there will be a bit more... excitement, whatever form it may take.

MizTMizTabout 12 years ago
What Is It

about Belle that has Damien so fixated? Is it the simple fact that she keeps saying NO or does he know something about her that we don't yet know? And what exactly is she? At one point you mentioned she howled so is she part wolf or maybe she's from the stars like the story Gran told her. And does the necklace contain something of that other world? I want more and I want it now...hehe-he. Now I have to wait for chapter 4 to get at least some of the answers and probably more questions. I look forward to it.

AutumnRayvenAutumnRayvenabout 12 years agoAuthor
Just a Note From the Author

So the next part will take another month probably BUT I plan on finishing it. Most questions answered.It won't answer everything because it's my thinking this could easily be a full fledged novel,

but I have to finish novel number 1 first. Thank you so much to those that have stuck with me. It has been awesome writing for you. =)

jLoHjLoHalmost 12 years ago
Continuation and Editing

i hope you update this story soon! it's got a lot of personality and a unique style that i like compared to other authors i've read on this site. i also noticed in ch. 1 that you were/are looking for an editor. do you still need one?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Update!

Please update! I love this story and dammit I need another chapter, it and damien are my drugs ;)

seriously, I love damien he's one of the most fun love interests/chaotic things i've read about in awhile. Please update!

sendhowardsendhowardalmost 12 years ago
Please write more!!

This is very good, I hope you will consider adding to it soon!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
in love

I absolutely love this story. I hope you will finish this story soon. I've check every week :-) thanks for posting an amazing story

AngellisaChunAngellisaChunover 11 years ago
Love it and gonna love the next chapter

i really do hope you add more chapters cuz ive seen some stories where they just stop ......and those stories was made in like 3 years ago or more so its kinda disheartening to find such a good story and see it not get updated or worked on so i really do hope you update it cuz Damien sizzling and i kinda hope theirs hair pulling,spanking,bondage hehe im kinda like that anyways keep reaching for that lovable muse btw all 3 chapters rockin

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
;D

Update soon? ;D

tac_naynwafflestac_naynwafflesalmost 11 years ago

I actually like Damien. He doesn't seem like an ass to her,on the contrary,he seems quite nice and enjoyable(heh,see what I did there?) Make more please.

BloodlustReaderBloodlustReaderover 10 years ago
No update

I've been waiting for an update and it doesn't seem like you're going to give one. It sucks reading stories and the author never finished them. This is a great story and is really like to see it finish. Maybe you'll finish it, but maybe not ...... Oh well

AutumnRayvenAutumnRayvenover 10 years agoAuthor
This is the Author.

This is the Author. I wanted to let anyone reading this know that I am almost done with the whole story. It is currently, in its unedited state, around 50 thousand words. I will begin posting this unedited version as soon as I pen the last few words. Sorry it took so long. I'm not a prolific writer unfortunately. I have to squeeze time in around family, work, and school. Thank you for the continued readership. That is just freaking amazing!

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