by pengoddess
The pacing and descriptive language are well done and I look forward to seeing more of your work, although "Damion" was almost a direct, feature for feature copy of actor Michael Clarke Duncan, star of THE GREEN MILE and other films. Inspiration, I suppose, is wherever you can find it, though if his dick IS pierced I wont ask how you know... :)
Really turned me on, Can you say it's gettin hot in here????Keep up the good work.
Pleeeeease make the chapters longer. This is too good. Fun fun fun read.
Pengoddess, I enjoyed this one. I like to read of big black men fucking white girls.
You write it very well, but I think that 'Literotica' have messed up with your grammar. Why is there ? instead of ' all the time? Ask for it to be resubmitted and printed correctly. I can tell by your writing excellence that it must have been correct, and that it is their error not yours. But anyway, it is a hot story and I hope to see more from you.
- a cum hungry lady from Sweden