by Tomsparty
I will come and find you, then kill you if you do not write more. I'm not joking. This made me unbelievably hot. More, More, MORE!!!!!
i'm ashamed to be reading this. maybe i'm insecure. tomorrow i will feel bad about myself. that's not your fault, you're just expressing your creativity. people's sexual proclivities should be encouraged. in a way, you're doing me a favor by encouraging what must obviously be a sexual proclivity of mine. i hope i can still have fun having vaginal intercourse with my girlfriend, because that's the sexual identity i want, not the identity associated with a story like this. can anyone relate to what i'm saying, or am i just more confused than everybody else out there?
loved this story, read all 6 chapters, u must write more, so badly want to know what happens next :)
good story lets have the real ending and see if we like it we are looking forword to knowing how things turned out.
I loved the story,and hope to see more about Duncan-Cindy,as I love wearing femme things.
I have never wrote a bad comment here about anyone before. AS nice as this story could have been and as great as the plot is I think too much story and detail was left out. I am not gonna complain about the English style of writing as I thought that was excellent so those of you who can't stand English writing go suck a dick. I know that English is different that American and people should realize that and either learn to read it or limit themselves to the mostly lazy style of our home country. I would love to see a followup to this in the future. I am not gonna post as Anonymous so if you want to discuss anything I have said feel free to contact me as.
s.t.p.e.t.e.r.7.5.@.g.m.a.i.l..c.o.m.
this story was a great, sentimental, erotic tale! I loved every minute of it!
Keep this up, love to see more
First i LOVE your story and wish i was Cindy!!! I do LOVE being a transgender (M to F) !! I'm 51 and have been full time female for 4 years now!!! I LOVE to lease men and am single!!! Back to the story i do feel you should put more of the she instead of him or his , and Dunk should be Cindy. just my thoughts . anyway your story HAS made me HOTand i look forward to reading more !!! Thanks from LISAMAY
At least let the boy nail or get nailed by mom and sis it's only fair.
I loved your story and i firmly believe once you,ve sucked a cock you,ll suck another there,s no doubt you love to feel feminine and when your on your knees taking care of your man you dont get anymore of a girly feeling than that i have always felt feminine i love wearing girly things and always have i went to a party one night and i met a girl Ann was her name i was chatting away with her then she disappeared i didnt think anything off it , until i went to the toilet and saw a load of guys looking into one of the bedrooms i looked in and there was Ann buck naked a cock buried up her arse one up her fanny and one each in her hand as she sucked and slobbered up and down this massive cock there was another at least ten guys in various stages of undress and although i am just a guy who likes dressing i wanted to be that girl so badly i mean how more feminine can you feel with that many guys wanting you so much anyway i ended up helping her out and began sucking cock to get them ready to fuck her i married her four months later and loved having a slut for a wife
Not for nothing, but what kind of parents just sort of trick their kid into getting raped for their own personal gain?
I sure I'd love Steve to come & lift my dress up & pull my knickers down to give me good "rodgering", you don't here that word very often,
I'm a firm believer once you have sucked cock & had ass your rammed you always go back for more
Rape in any form is simply unacceptable. The fact the poor boy's sister and parents took an active and collaborative role in the aggravated assault, aggravated rape and conspiracy only strengthens the need for their prosecution and incarceration - to a maximum sentence of 15-20 years!
Writing about it should incur at least 5-7 years imprisonment.