All Comments on 'Dan and Kris'

you are a very good writer. I love your realistic portrayal of kids losing their virginity.

thanx

gregorynmoody@comcast.net

i liked it and agree great outcome to a friendship :) your a great writer only thing i'd say is add in a little more detail i don't mind it the way you write it but stories can be way better if longer imo :)

A lovely story with a GREAT ending.

You write well. I hope we hear from you often.

js

Really fun and sexy story, great writing!