All Comments on 'Dana: My New Neighbor'

Then the use of the words 'bitch, slut' etc turned me off as did the inevitable oversized cock.

.. to use that kinda language - and huge cocks (or tits) make a good story unbelievable, even in fantasyland.

Stan

Needs more chapters, to the point that maybe she is eventually pregnant when she goes to get her kids outa school.

I loved the build up and the discription of the sex. I hope there will be a continuation of the story...

Definitely needs continuing. If her husband is neglecting her, perhaps she may want to have your baby, too?

He's divorced, doesn't want to screw up her marriage, doesn't want to be a step-father but he ducks her anyway. That's not hot, that's irresponsible. Then the ever so popular, Wow, he's got a big dick so he can satisfy her. Whatever. And she knew where his hands were roaming when he was putting lotion on her. That's why she gave it to him.