All Comments on 'Dana's Side Ch. 01'

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andyMassageandyMassagealmost 12 years ago
great follow up story

Hope you continue with Dana's side, great follow up story Thanks

photosaurusphotosaurusalmost 12 years ago
Not bad for starters

I'm not sure this could stand on its own, but being a fan of your Lake House Lessons series, this is interesting.

WistfulSeniorWistfulSenioralmost 12 years ago
Appreciating the Story Variation

I loved your Lake House Lessions story and was saddened when it ended. However, the last chapter seemed rushed and not quite up to the standard set by the previous 11 chapters. I am very pleasantly surprised to see you reliving the story from Dana's point of view and look forward to the following chapters. Hopefully, we will finally learn the reason Dana did not latch onto Jack when she had numerous opportunities.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

not sure if i want to read this since you ruined the original. when you didnt let him end up with dana at the end kind of was a total let down.

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