All Comments on 'Dance of Days Ch. 05'

And a Tart. I always like those romantic interludes in bed. While for some it's just not sex unless there is some twist to it. I always prefered making love. And that is what this story is about. Being in love and making love and just being happy with each other.

Nice work.

it's just so wonderfully sweet and intimate! you know i love it =)

That twist at the end is intriguing... I feel like asking, "Please sir, can I have some more?" Nicely done.

I loved the tone, the way the story felt like the line in the poem, loving and giving :)

Well Done!

Very nice, the salivea thew me until the very end. Nice job.

Really cute story. The ending had me grinning, when small hints throughout the text eventually made sense. Good job!

of "kept man",,,? grin - very nice

-Rowan

Very enjoyable. :)

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