All Comments on 'Dance of Days Ch. 07'

Colleen died in 2006, so if it's incomplete (which I don't think it is), it's going to stay that way.

Where is Chapter 8. Ha ha ha. Probably your style but an addition or continuation to this story is very much welcome. I gave you only a 3 for i feel that it is incomplete.

This was a wonderful way to end the chain. It was so sweet and romantic. Keep up the great work!

As always, Colly, you did a wonderful job and wrote a moving story. :)

Vix

to end the chain. Very well done, Colly!

As much as I want to beg for more, I think you've ended it perfectly. Sweet, sexy, and touching.

Shades of Joe Rochfort! I waited until the end to comment on your series. Well conceived, well executed, literate, articulate and sometimes erotic. All in all, well done.

I loved that there was no sex, only implied passion. It is lovely and I enjoyed the descriptive nature of the environment.

I felt some of that darkness reigned in behind this story. Sad and melancolly undertones in a story about mutual salvation. And the light shines in at the end. Sometimes you just can't help being romantic, eh? Subtle tensions woven into a solid plot kept me reading.

I was disappointed with one aspect, it was over too soon. ;)

Great work, Colly.

Such a nice little story of personal discovery.

And I really enjoyed the historical setting, the way you described the horror and despair that the war created.

Very well done, Colleen.

*HUGS*