All Comments on 'Dance with the Devil'

For those that don't know, this story is part I of a trilogy. Check my author page for parts II and III. They are:

I. Dance with the Devil (Redux is the same as this, with illustrations)

II. Bath of Blood

III. Kiss of the Succubus

an ending so unexpected. the sex was awesome, i loved showing off my wife, but if that were to be her ending i think i would have died myself...a thrilling exciting erotic story,,,btw are u a guy or girl

Great story and themes.

This is currently my all time favourite. I love the concept, the mystery and rush with Gabby, flashing neighbours but getting wrapped into a vampire mystery - but also elements of a cuckold theme which I personally enjoy and am doing with my real life wife! There is always something deeply sexual when one dwells into a bit of mystery or horror in a story.

THANKYOU so much for such an excellent story!

Wish you had more on this type of theme --- saved this as my favourite. Reading this (and read to my wife) - gave me an extreme hardon. Wife loved the story too.

Hot and scary. Especially the spiders. I hate spiders.

I thought Luke would have dumped a few loads in the hot married slut before he killed her. lol