All Comments on 'Dance with the Devil Ch. 06'

This is really a great story, but it sounds alot like another one that I have been reading also are you operating under a pseudonym?

Wouuwwww That waas fucking hot : ))) good job . Post more ASAP

I am really enjoying this story and can't wait for you to post more. I bet Darien flips out when she realizes who is responsible for putting her brother in the hospital.

damn that was hot!

They are so on fire together...I need more PLEASE!!!!

I'm so happy she stood firm and told her brother no. Devin's punk behind needs to go sit down somewhere and sto bringing his sister down. At the rate he's going he won't be satisfied until they both have literally nothing. I'm surprised Darien stayed away as long as she did. Good for her but in some ways despite my like for the sexing he gives her I still want her to be able to say no to Marcellus and mean it, even if he is sexing her good.

I love this story. Someone mentioned it sounding like another story they are reading, I was thinking the same thing. Two names in this story are mentioned in the other story. I absolutely love the other one, just wondering!!

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THIS IS WHAT I WOULD DESCRIBE AS HOT FROM THE BEGINNING TO THE END=SEXY!

Loved the story from beginning to end! And thank you for finishing it!!!

"He gripped her hips and began to pound her hard. He knew she liked it a little rough. So he gave into her wants. Just this once he thought, she could have her way."

...and of course giving in to her wants or, 'her way', is his way too so... Wait, so how is he giving in to her wants again? LMAO! Come on!

Very well-written story. I love the whole Italian mobster theme. It's definitely one of my favorites in this type of storyline.

The power of the D she just can't say no and I hope her brother didn't sell her out

Just wow.