All Comments on 'Dance with the Devil Ch. 08'

That was great!!!!! I love it. I'm so glad they found their way back to each other.

but for how long. I don't think Carlos is going to let him walk away. Will she be safe or will Carlos take her away from him?

im likin the angle ur story is taken and its jam pack full of passion too. A couple who are tryin to figure out a way to be 2gether without losin face and pride.

Marcellus was working my nerves in the first half with him getting all belligerent about her keeping his baby away from him. Did he not many a time state he didnt want no ball and chain? Get over it. Anywho, I'm not too sure how I feel about her caving in. I'm happy they're giving it a shot but safetywise....?

I have enjoyed the story from the beginning. I hope you will update soon as I want to know how the it all ends for Darin and Marcellos.

especially for someone who is supposed to be concerned for the welfare of her child. Her only condition for them getting back together was no sex? I don't think so. She loves him but she loves that child too and the child needs her more. I don't buy this reconciliation. I'm happy it happened but it was way too unrealistic.

I hope he can leave the lifestyle and become legal...glad they are trying to work it out!!!

i think you are a great writer. Check spellings and flow in a few places. i hope you have considered writing to get published.

Yes, they dance so perfectly together, whether in hatred of what they feel for each other, that their true love comes through.

I still think she should've put up MORE resistance. I'm pissed at Marcellus still.

I agree with Anon, she should've resisted at least sexually, it just confused thing

... and this guy knows nothing about this woman he claims to be obsessed with.

He acts like sex is love. There is absolutely no logical reason Darien should keep giving him chances.

I sure hope she tells him what an appalling person he is (not just her goal of protecting her baby from him).