by Katerina Val-Kyrie
If this is your...(ahem)...maiden voyage into the genre, I can't wait to see what your next production will be like. Hopefully, just as good as this. I was most impressed with the romantic imagery, which is often lacking in the stories I read. You have a very gentle touch.
Your story was perfect! Just the right blend of story, character development, plot, and sexual detail. It pulls you in and you experience it right along with the character.
I can't wait for you to write more. :)
I absolutely loved the story. It is a very well written and enthralling piece. I hope that there are more stories like this to come Katerina.
Thank you.
I've always loved stories involving beautiful female strippers dancing nude for appreciative women, and so this one was an instant favorite with me! I just wish more movie scenes would incorporate this wonderful idea, and include more girl-on-girl lap-dancing! It's just so incredibly hot!
Wonderful! No other word can express it better!
If you wrote about something you don't do... you were taking notes when someone else did it to you!
I raise my glass and announce that you should be accepted into the Upper Hals here, if there is such a thing. Another word just came to mind! Brilliant! Thank you for writing this.
Ralph...
A great story, I'd recomend that next time though you make it a love story since it seems to be that more than an actual lesbian tryst
Of course I may be biased, since I was one of your volunteer editors. ;-)
I recall your being somewhat surprised when I said that you are talented. Having read the other readers' comments here, I can only say, do you believe me now?
Quite the delightfull first effort in this area for the good Lady Katerina, from my personal experience and association with erotic dancers in my life, she had captured the high end of their appeal and set that into a truely arousing adventure. I look forward to seeing Cassie and Serena under the hot lights and behind closed doors again sometime soon.....
Loved your story. I could really feel the passion and desire these two felt for one another. Look forward to seeing the next installment as the adventure continues.
Well done!
I love it! Intruiging characters and a great story-line! I wish I was Cassie- Serena sounds horny...Wanna fuck me sometime?