by Lockit
Very nice job of writing. Background, buildup, comission and ending. All went so well with editing and grammar. Again, not my genre but had to read more of your postings. Thank you.
I hope you do a sequel! i think i'm in love with the wife in this story lol, j/k. Seriously it was very well written, and most of all I love the story because you can tell her love for hubby, she's not just out to screw around. VERY well written!
-rick
Another man lead down the path by a cheating wife. Can you say annulment?
Nobody can say you don’t have an imagination. The twist at the end was good. I don’t know about anyone else but you lead me down the garden path into believing that she had cheated on him with the bride’s cousin on other occasions only to find out, as he did, that it was a one off. If he enjoyed it and was sure it wouldn’t happen again and his marriage remained happy and no one was hurt then nothing is wrong.