All Comments on 'Dancing With The Dark'

So one star. Learn to write, please.

As title says Great Great Start! Has a lot of potential, advice would be to get it critiqued by someone on the site. It can go along way, make your work better, and avoid hate comments.

the spelling, grammar and syntax are atrocious(there are worse). i do appreciate that the style is an ambitious form, i'm sure it will improve the more you work at the story which has great potential.

very good story so far i didnt even notice spelling errors because was that caught up in story...people shouldnt leave hateful comments and not their names its chicken shit...i wish there was more to read and cant wait to see where you take this story with so many possibilities there already...

I liked this story a lot please write more.

Sets up a good foundation and introduction of the characters. Disappointed there isn't further installments yet.

You should consider expanding this story. Some parts were quite fast pace but it's still very enjoyable. Hopefully you'll have the urge to continue :)