by Drmaxc
I'm not much into non-consent. While the tale was erotic, I could not get excited about the content.
Max you must find a way to make these nasty men pay for their corruption of dear Annabelle . Even this late in the day they must not be allowed to get away with it. As Simon Templar would say "smite the ungodly ".
A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
Your writing, quite frankly, is fantastic. It brings a whole new level to a story when the writing is more than just "he fucked her cunt." Thank you so incredibly much for the depth and complexity of your stories - at times I think that I find the sentences, the words themselves erotic!
liked this one very much.
thanks for posting.
Really enjoyed this well written and erotic story. I caught the two parter on the Ero&^ MindContol site and was glad to see it here so that I could comment. I hope to be reading more about Annabel's sexcapades with the MD. Also please consider the Hypnotist and MD seducing then coercing other beautiful single/attached women. Given their professions they must encounter many beauties in various situations. These tag teaming brothers wield the velvet hammer of MC/NC/Reluctant so smoothly the lovely doesn't know what hit her. My vote is that they "dance on" a little while longer. Thanks for your contributions,