All Comments on 'Dangerous Affairs Ch. 11'

that was amazing. i hate it had to end so soon, but i've really enjoyed reading your story. keep up the good work, continue to improve and i look forward to the next stories you will write.

You all have been very kind and I appreciate all comments and emails. thanks everyone.

I love seeing the growth in your writing and the blossoming confidence that had you posting this story on other sites. Let me know if you need an editor for the next bout of awesome crime dramas you write ;)

Great story! Please write more

This story is long winded crap.

Loved the pace of the story, I hope you feel encouraged to keep on writing as I would look forward to reading more