by TxRad
I guess geeks have alot of other skills I hadn't thought about.......good character development. Leighlilly
What a hot story. Just found you and it's the first of your stories I've read. You made it all so real. I will continue to read. Please continue to write. Thanks. D.
Unrealistic premise but steamy content. Given what I was hoping to do while reading this, I'm glad I got the sizzle, not the steak. Good job.
Oh, seriously HOT SEX! I love good writing about realistically drawn, complex, truly human (albeit horny) characters. If the carnal joy is happy, then so am I.
...and not just the shower. A really nice first time story. Thanks for sharing.
It made me so happy to read how your character lost her virginity [the first time I guess? Lol]. I lost mine the same way, and never thought I'd come across something I could relate to. Even though it's just a story, it made me feel better lol. So thank you oh so much! Off to read your other ones (:
... second time around.
This one wasn't about love, in particular, but it certainly was about lust!
Sometimes that's exactly what's needed.
withering is the wrong word. You mean "writhing."
with·er·ing
ˈwiT͟HəriNG/Submit
adjective
1.
intended to make someone feel mortified or humiliated.
"a withering look"
synonyms: scornful, contemptuous, scathing, stinging, devastating; More
2.
(of heat) intense; scorching.
noun
1.
the action of becoming dry and shriveled.
TX thanks for another great read! I always love your characters, they are so relatable especially the banter, really improves the quality of the story!